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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Sasuke is so dirty! I loved it. And Naruto and Itachi...what are they up to? Moving on to chapter 3.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: I am shocked nobody is reviewing this. If you are planning a threesome, maybe you should put it under threesome/moresomes if it isn't already posted there. I can't remember. Regardless, I would love some NaruSasuIta. It seems that's the only way Sasuke will get involved is if Itachi is also involved in the relationship with Naruto. But that's just me. Anyway, I hope you finish this because it is really good. I really want to know what happens next. Thanks for reading "Broken Mirror" once again. And yes, I will also rate before I go. Bye!
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June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Sasuke engaging in a little Shadow Clone sex. So funny and so sexy. I loved it. For a first story, the first chapter has got me totally hooked. Moving on to chapter 2. Oh, and thank you sooo much for reading my story "Broken Mirror". Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you. That was incredibly rude and I apologize. Anyway, on to chapter 2.
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's pretty good for a first story! (is it really?) Anyway, I was wondering in what world your story takes place, because there are clones (Naruto world) but Itachi is still there (Itachi is dead in Naruto)... Anyway, I really liked it and I hope you will update soon!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm well well this is gonna get good
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks to be a pretty interesting story and I do so love Sas-uke scenes. BTW, you like ITASASUNARU...read Brutally Beautiful by Word Slave.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BLACKMAIL!!!!!! Beautiful! lol. And sooooooo evil. I love it! Im happy that I made you happy by being the first reveiwer but it pulled me in. I cant wait to see more. ^^
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. We're starting off hot and heavy and I think I like it. lol. I dislike the cliffy though... *pouts* You mean person, you! Please hurry and post the second chappie.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was a nice start. i like the fact that they will still have 'abilities'. i can't wait for the next chapter. sasu/sasu action wow i don't know what's hotter than that lol ^_^
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was a pretty good start. and how dare you leave it like that?!u want us to get blue balls?!!
i mean... *coughcough*
anywhoo.... yes...please update.
lol...sasuke becoming his own bitch should be hilarious..wonder if itachi is gonna bust in on him...hmmm
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
i mean... *coughcough*
anywhoo.... yes...please update.
lol...sasuke becoming his own bitch should be hilarious..wonder if itachi is gonna bust in on him...hmmm
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*