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for Stricken

by JazzyBell

person Asia
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha! This is so good! I didn't think I'd like a story where everyone is having sex with each other but you wrote it in a way that makes it so interesting. I love it. I want more! I especially love the foursome between team 7. ;)
person Skyrere
schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously enjoying this fic. What a unique plot. Plenty of smut. Awesome.
person Lala
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WHY HASN'T THIS BEEN CONTINUED YET?!
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, well written. I do have some constructive criticism, occasionally you would add an extra letter like when you put her when you should have put he. I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters. For your next fan fiction I thought you could do one where the disease turns the kunoichi in to nymphos.
person Risotto
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm this was yummy
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. Could you please give Naruto some hands on training maybe from Anko?
Then maybe the student will teach the teacher. What happening with Tenten and will Asuma be able to look at Kurenai.Maybe Temari gets swapped with Hana. What is Hana doing or should I say who. You think Hiashi and Tsume
having a love hate diesease going on?

schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MORE TEAM SEVEN!!!!! And I can't wait for Gaara . . .
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome.. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person butabara
schedule September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah don't stop there! This gets my twisted, perverted little mind just ROLLING! Wow, wow, wow, and WOW!

I really, REALLY hope to see an update for this very, VERY soon!
person Nika
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is really great. The chars are all IC, or as much as we can imagine in situations like this. Please update !!!