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by JazzyBell

person Kohle
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please upload the next chapter! It's getting really good!
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so interesting! I can't wait to read more, especially Kakashi/Sakura parts. I can't help but feel sorry for Tenten, though. lol!
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that's all i can say... this one is sure original!!
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Niiiiccceee. lol enjoyed it very, very much and I hope to see more from you soon. Gotta say though I'm kinda envious of Tenten cause of Lee, but pity her for Guy and I'm insanely jealous of Hinata cause of Shino...Wonder who gets Kankoru???
person I am Telgar
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would not be surprised if Neji is in isolation. I can see him jack himself off so that he will not be trying to screw any Hyuuga women. Now maybe Hinata will gather up her courage and tell Naruto that she loves him. After all if Hinata is in a relationship with Naruto surely the Hokage will not expect her to have sex with others. Maybe Tenten will find Neji in isolation. Surely Hiashi would want the best for his nephew.
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well an interesting idea to be able to get massive amounts of sex with different pairings. Although I'm really hoping for some more action soon, and I hope to see a few things. Like Kakashi/Anko scene, Naruto/Sakura, as well as anything else you can think of. I wasn't much of a fan of the Sakura/kakashi moment and I'm wishing you'd write Kakashi and her apart for some time.
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! I'm damn near about to pull my own hair out. I want to see what happens next, so bad! I really enjoyed this last chapter. There were so many funny moments and I just couldn't wait for Naruto, Sasuke, and Gaara to come into the picture. Although, I'm curious about the LeexTenxgai moment and the Kiba/Hinata moment also. Geez, it took me a long time to find a good story and it's already over(for now). Please update soon!!!? Oh, and great job!
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
looks like we are going to have a village orgy. lets hope everyone remembers to use protection.
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hinata. I wonder how Ten Ten is doing, or if she is running in terror. Kiba may not survive this. Lol I love how this chapter ended. To funny.