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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME ! :D You're a GENIUS !!
I can't wait for an all out session between Naruto, Sasuke, Sai, Kakashi and Sakura ! I love moresomes ^^ hihi !
Also, I'll probably laugh my head off when you get to Team Gai XD hahha, keep writing this story (^^,) <3
I can't wait for an all out session between Naruto, Sasuke, Sai, Kakashi and Sakura ! I love moresomes ^^ hihi !
Also, I'll probably laugh my head off when you get to Team Gai XD hahha, keep writing this story (^^,) <3
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Solid action, solid plot, and realistic writing... considering the situation anyway. Most of all, I admire how you control the pacing of the story, and how you don't hold back no matter how dark or sordid situations might get. I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic and look forward to more. Peace out, JazzyBell.
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you manage to incorporate steamy sex with light-hearted (albeit somewhat promiscuous) humor. can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, please not lee and gai just don´t write it please ^^
just a joke the stors is good, but beeing a huge shikamaru fan, I didn´t like the part with him beeing so mean,... but still I like the story and need to read on,.. even with the green bushy brow^^
just a joke the stors is good, but beeing a huge shikamaru fan, I didn´t like the part with him beeing so mean,... but still I like the story and need to read on,.. even with the green bushy brow^^
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the Ino sex :D:D:D hell, bring in more people, show that little slut what she's really there in the series for!!!! :D
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Its really interesting. The only that really scared me...its the sex with Lee and Gai....lol talk about nightmares lol....and thats one of the reasons why i love it..because it has a event that doesn't meet a characters interest(I think thats how you would explain it) Oh pls write more. I wanna know what happends next!
:) :)
:) :)
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Should I say poor Ten Ten or lucky girl. Good lord all that stamina and energy. At least they asked her first. I wonder if there is a way for Ino to get into the guy's heads and help heal them a little or stave off the drive. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Good job with this story so far.
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh... can this get anymore troublesome? yes... i think it can. i saw the author's note and i ask you... do we really want the akatski involved? i can see that going wrong in so many ways.
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome. I love how much screentime Tenten is getting. hey, um, I'm new here, so do you know how I can keep up with stories without having to type in the title every few days in the search bar?
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
for the love of god update this story!!!! I nearly died laughing at the concept of a horny dom Gai then I was intrigued as to how that would pan out.