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for Harem

by kishimotolover

schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this story and can't wait for more!!!
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This interesting i do wonder who will get who hmm is there going to be any background story on how they got the slaves for the harems
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not to bad of a idea. I think you should post a non-chapter that contains your concept and for ideas if you have not plot.I cant what to see how this turn out. I now it's not like but I hope team 10 will be togather.
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your first chapter, not bad at all. I can understand about the first paragraph, it can be the hardest one of all. But over all I think you did a great job. I look forward to your second chapter.