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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It was so good I soooo love your story! I love the time of the pharaos and now combined with a cute Naruto and a gorgeous Itachi! WOW! You have me there..love it :)
Update soon and your other story too *many hugs*
Update soon and your other story too *many hugs*
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to see what the priests will do when they find out Itachi has their god's son.
Mwahahaha.
At any rate great chap. I must request that you dont turn Naruto into s submissive personality (not nessesarily sexual either.)
Although when ity comes to sex switches just seem more realistic.
Mwahahaha.
At any rate great chap. I must request that you dont turn Naruto into s submissive personality (not nessesarily sexual either.)
Although when ity comes to sex switches just seem more realistic.
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I love ancient mythology, especially egyptian. Oh, the cleverness of you! I will be keeping an eye on this fic. As you know, I'm also enjoying the other fic you are writing at the moment. Thanks for posting!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love this story!
It's really incredibly unusual from most other stories here, I don't think there is another like this, which makes it even better, poor naruto, it seems like he's going to have a hard time saving Itachi xD
Pleasee Update soon!
It's really incredibly unusual from most other stories here, I don't think there is another like this, which makes it even better, poor naruto, it seems like he's going to have a hard time saving Itachi xD
Pleasee Update soon!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Egyptian mythology has always fascinated me so it is interesting to see your interpretation of it. Can't wait to read more!
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was pretty impressed with this story. Your use of the Egyptian mythology felt legitimate, you know? You really fleshed out and humanized the gods in a way I've never seen before. I like this whole set up.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was sheer genius.
I've never been a fan of Naruto/Itachi so initally I was put off.
But I thought this sounds like an orginal story, so whats the harm?
And now I'm glad I read it!
You write beautifully. You manage to keep Naruto and Itachi in character when they're completely out of their normal element.
I'm in awe of your skill and will be waiting patiently for the next installment of this amazing fanfiction.
~Keelar
I've never been a fan of Naruto/Itachi so initally I was put off.
But I thought this sounds like an orginal story, so whats the harm?
And now I'm glad I read it!
You write beautifully. You manage to keep Naruto and Itachi in character when they're completely out of their normal element.
I'm in awe of your skill and will be waiting patiently for the next installment of this amazing fanfiction.
~Keelar
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cool! You doing well in getting the mind set of the time period. I wonder why Itachi thought when he killed the adviser, what set him off about being a child molester? He must of like them really young considering the time period.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ItaNaru, yay!!!!!! *cheers*
And not only that, but what a great start to an excellent story, I love it!
I've always loved the Egyptian mythology and combining it with Naruto is genius. It's incredibly unique because the fics of the Egyptian sort have mostly involved the pairing SasuNaru or other Het pairings, so putting ItaNaru in a story like this is highly appreciated and wanted. I also think it was a great idea to make Naruto Anubis son, and you portrayed every character in a believable way. I tend to dislike an evil Itachi but I in this I don't mind because I know Naruto will probably make him a good guy again.
Please don't take too long on the update, I really anticipating the continuation.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
And not only that, but what a great start to an excellent story, I love it!
I've always loved the Egyptian mythology and combining it with Naruto is genius. It's incredibly unique because the fics of the Egyptian sort have mostly involved the pairing SasuNaru or other Het pairings, so putting ItaNaru in a story like this is highly appreciated and wanted. I also think it was a great idea to make Naruto Anubis son, and you portrayed every character in a believable way. I tend to dislike an evil Itachi but I in this I don't mind because I know Naruto will probably make him a good guy again.
Please don't take too long on the update, I really anticipating the continuation.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This intro chapter was bloody amazing! I really can't wait to see what happens!