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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Fantastic story and a beautiful ending.
I can't wait for your next work of fiction.
Keep up the great work. I loved this. ^^
Fantastic story and a beautiful ending.
I can't wait for your next work of fiction.
Keep up the great work. I loved this. ^^
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! This story is just amazing! I'm so happy everything worked out for Itachi and Naruto. It is truely a love story through the ages. I'm almost sad that it had to come to an end.
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was such a great story. Thanks for writing, and also for completing it!
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Ya did a great job of mixing history, fantasy and reality really well done. Thanks
Till next time
Yami
Till next time
Yami
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MEW! I am sooo sad to see it end. But what an ending! It was a wonderful and touching story. *hugs* Thank you very much for allowing us this beautiful treasure.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. the mythology in it is amazing as well, it just works so perfectly. though I really wish they would send someone for Sasuke as well...like, I don't know...maybe Gaara? :3 (I'm sort of stuck on that pairing for some strange reason)but anyways love the story, you had me pretty scared for a second there with Naruto about to be eaten and all but it was all for the greater good XD
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh so lovely I was worried there at the earlier parts of the chapter for everyone. This is coming to a very nice close very nice job. I could see this version of Naruto easily wandering around sleeplessly before Itachi's trial and for some reason describing him fading like he'd been was a poignant thing that stuck out.
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh-oh! The next chapter will be an epilogue, right? Will Naruto and Itachi have a son?/Children? That would be too cute! But anyway, please update soon!!!! ^^
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen an Egyptian based Naruto story before. I love this! It being Ita/Naru is a bonus. The story is excellent and the setting is well researched. Good job, keep writing.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay now i'm really worried about Sasuke. He may not have been raiseed like his brother but because he grew up knowing how to feel it makes him far more dangerous. Hopefully Itachi will find Naruto in the afterlife both have suffered enough. But Intef is a fool and I think he will suffer the most from Sasuke's wrath once he comes out of his shock.
Till next time
Yami
Till next time
Yami