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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, its one of the ones I wait on pins and needles for.
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You wonderful, evil, amazing, soul stealing, author. How dare you combine two of my very favourite things in such a manner! I can't even begin to start with the praise I want to throw your way. There were a few grammatical errors along the way one being in one chapter 'the Naruto' coming up a lot when it should have just been Naruto and some other ones I can't recall this second off the top of my head. Nevertheless, you evil, evil, amazing author that was a brutal cliffhanger, and I'm nearly shouting out for more!
For some reason I want to picture Konohamaru as Naruto's servant (infept? ohh I'm so tired his name isn't coming to me right now), and the scene with him standing up to Itachi was beautiful. The explaining why Naruto wasn't in the records and the demon state was done well, and the research that was put into this also shows well.
For some reason I want to picture Konohamaru as Naruto's servant (infept? ohh I'm so tired his name isn't coming to me right now), and the scene with him standing up to Itachi was beautiful. The explaining why Naruto wasn't in the records and the demon state was done well, and the research that was put into this also shows well.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK you are driving me CRAZY! This story has been in my head now for what over a week? I am thinking about it all the time when I am supposed to work, be paying attention in class, listening to my boss piss people off... sometimes I swear hes Madara.....lol that would be funny. But no joke. YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON! I ran out of scenarios for the next scene and its driving me up the wall......
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is not a pairing I normally read, but I'm very happy I read it anyway!! This is really good! One of the best fanfics I've encountered in quite a while!! x33 Looking forward to more~!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! Is Madara gonna torture Naruto?? NuUuuuu~~
~Dee
~Dee
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes!!
Itachi is gonna freak come morning. lol
Hopefully Mandara does not realize exactly what he has and holds off killing Naruto so that he can use him for ransom or maybe a demotivational murder or something. Anything to give Naruto a chance to replenish his energies!!
Keep up the great work!
Itachi is gonna freak come morning. lol
Hopefully Mandara does not realize exactly what he has and holds off killing Naruto so that he can use him for ransom or maybe a demotivational murder or something. Anything to give Naruto a chance to replenish his energies!!
Keep up the great work!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had been reading this story since the beginning & I have to say that you have utterly captivated my interest! This plot is totally unlike any other story I have read & I have read quite a number of fanfiction. I can't wait to see where you continue to take us on this story!
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh cliffy!!! i always look forward to reading your new chappies and this one is no disappoint. I liked the conversation between naruto and ita. it kinda broke into a beginning of itachi's humanity. Definitely loved it!!! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... *lies twitching on the floor in a puddle of blood*
I can't believe I missed a chapter! But I'm so glad I got to read it now along with another one. You see that twitching body over there in the puddle of blood, yeah her over there, that's me, no kidding, I mean it. That's how I ended up after reading these chapters. The new one caused the most of it but the previous one contributed a lot. Why you might ask? Well, let me tell you...
You're one heck of an authoress, those two chapter were as amazing as the rest, if not more. And not just because of the smut, I'm not that perverted XD. The plot thickens and I'm enjoying every second of it. I liked how Naruto finally gave in to Itachi, but it tore at my heart to read that Itachi still treats Naruto as a slave and a possession and nothing more, especially since Naruto became so saddened by it. Though, who wouldn't be?
Madara seems to play a big part in this story as the antagonist, and I'm curious to see whether he'll become as fascinated with Naruto as the Uchihas are. Perhaps only because of Naruto's powers and heritage, but I got an inkling that Madara just might steal Naruto out of Itachi's hands. I don't know what will happen really, that's for me to find out when the next chapter will show up, but a girl can hope can't she? Now that Naruto's turning into a more Kyuubi-looking state and war is upon them, the excitement grows. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm at the edge of my seat here. Eh, yeah, I just crawled up from the floor a while ago, typing with bloodied hands is difficult, too slippery for my tastes.
Anyway, try to suppress that horrible mental image and keep up with the good work.
Good luck with the writing and take care.
Hugs =^_^=
I can't believe I missed a chapter! But I'm so glad I got to read it now along with another one. You see that twitching body over there in the puddle of blood, yeah her over there, that's me, no kidding, I mean it. That's how I ended up after reading these chapters. The new one caused the most of it but the previous one contributed a lot. Why you might ask? Well, let me tell you...
You're one heck of an authoress, those two chapter were as amazing as the rest, if not more. And not just because of the smut, I'm not that perverted XD. The plot thickens and I'm enjoying every second of it. I liked how Naruto finally gave in to Itachi, but it tore at my heart to read that Itachi still treats Naruto as a slave and a possession and nothing more, especially since Naruto became so saddened by it. Though, who wouldn't be?
Madara seems to play a big part in this story as the antagonist, and I'm curious to see whether he'll become as fascinated with Naruto as the Uchihas are. Perhaps only because of Naruto's powers and heritage, but I got an inkling that Madara just might steal Naruto out of Itachi's hands. I don't know what will happen really, that's for me to find out when the next chapter will show up, but a girl can hope can't she? Now that Naruto's turning into a more Kyuubi-looking state and war is upon them, the excitement grows. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm at the edge of my seat here. Eh, yeah, I just crawled up from the floor a while ago, typing with bloodied hands is difficult, too slippery for my tastes.
Anyway, try to suppress that horrible mental image and keep up with the good work.
Good luck with the writing and take care.
Hugs =^_^=
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit!~ Insense! Itachi made a huge error trying to distance himself from Naruto. He should know better by now that that's an impossibility.
The sex scene... perfection. I loved their struggle for dominance and additionally I always love a feral Naruto in the bedroom. =^^=
Although I'm really wondering now what role Naruto plans to play in the upcoming war. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to it.
The sex scene... perfection. I loved their struggle for dominance and additionally I always love a feral Naruto in the bedroom. =^^=
Although I'm really wondering now what role Naruto plans to play in the upcoming war. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to it.