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yay new chappie!!! thanks for updating!!! sorry about the lack of comment lately! FInally Itachi gets naruto but he's such a butt.......I wonder if naruto comes to his rescue!! I definitely like where this story is going! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!!

Ohhh, what a horrible place to leave it. That was an amazing chapter and my motto is that if sex doesn't change you or your relationship it isn't worth having... or in this case writing about. You did amazing! Thank you and I love you're other story as Well. kisses

Man, Naru better watch out! You made an error in the chapter you said "He watched as Naruto placed the blonde on the bed and smoothed the clean linen sheets across his body" didn't you mean "He watched as Itachi placed the blonde... blabla" instead?
Anyway I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

Truly fantastic story.
I love it and can't wait for more. ^_^

loving it so far keep it up!!!1

Wow. I think knowing the truth has only made Itachi want him more. ^^

Keep up the great work!

This is, AWESOME! xD YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! xD This fic is so COOL! xD With Naruto being a guard the Fields of Hetep and Iaru and Itachi a pharaoh in Ancient Egypt! That spells FREAKING AWESOME! xD
Please UPDATE NOW! xD
D.K.-chan

More please! God, I can't wait to see Madara's face when he get's a look at cutie Naruto. He'll probably be like:
"Damn! I also killed that hottie!!!" XDDDDDD

Hehe I wonder what Itachi will do when he realises that Naru came on the sheets... mmmh Naruto better run.. But I sure as hell hope he won'.. hehe. Will Sasuke find someone in this fic?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Good work!

Yay, another chapter! *desperately trying to cover her bleeding nose as she's typing* XD
Thank you for updating so quickly, that totally made my day, I'm so happy right now.
And what made me even happier is that fact that Naruto didn't die, I was worried for a while but by the end of the chapter I could sigh with relief because he pulled it through. The Kyuubi-thing was well thought out, that it would appear each time he would find himself close to dying. I wondered how you would put Kyuubi in the mix and you did so brilliantly.
The last part was my favorite one, go figures XD, it was so incredibly deliciously hot....just wow. They haven't even gotten to the foreplay yet and I'm already suffering from blood loss... you'll probably kill me by the end of this fic. XD And like I said before, the description of their reactions, surroundings and actions was amazingly written, it was very dreamlike and I really, really liked it a lot.
I could probably write several pages of what I love about this story and its chapters, but that would be too time consuming and I'm pretty sure you'd find it annoying. XD Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the continuation.
I'm curious about what Madara will do next, how Naruto and Itachi's relationship will develop further and if Sasuke will change his approach to Naruto after the incident.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing, but remember not to overexert yourself. An exhausted authoress won't do! ;P
See you later. Take care. Hugs =^_^=