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for The Weight of the Heart

by Daydreamer79

person satterb
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to see this updated. Thanks for creating such a magnificent work of art! I am loving the characters and the plot. Keep up the great work!
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I follow both this one and When Dreams May Come, but I must say this is my favorite. The way you properly infuse mythology into your story in way that would correspond with the life back in Egypt is pure genius to me. I have few stories where it is done so methodically and I love it! I happily await your next update :]
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Lovely addition to the fandom. Well written and excellent plotwork. I hope to see more soon!
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I wonder how long it will take for Itachi to realize there is something off about his blond. ^^

Keep up the great work!
person Word_Slave
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter very much. and you are horrible for leaving it there... lol but I understand and can't wait for more. I'll get to what dreams may come.. it's on my list. I just haven't gotten there yet. Sigh...
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking this story so far. i kinda pity Itachi when i read ch. 3
person Ikippiki
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aha! So who caught him I wonder? Itachi or Sasuke? mmmh This is getting better by the minute! Can't wait to read more!
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TY! Thats all I was worried about. :)
HUG!
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Concept, I'll looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha.. Naruto's not going to put up well with ownership. He's an equal or nothing... yet if it means staying "property" in order to stay close to Itachi... hmm..

Keep up the great work!