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February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon, I just have to know what happens next and if Naruto as got captured or not.
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now I remember where I seen something just like this fanfic, you must have based it off of this Naruto Doujin called "PM 11 - Indecent Ninja Slave" of course Kin in the Doujin has Sasuke as her sex toy and not Termai, please just tell me that Naruto will save the girls and kill those bastards. Also here is the link to that doujin on a site that I go to quite alot......http://g.e-hentai.org/g/18592/2be0a9e47d/
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please say that Naruto finds out where they are keeping the girls and attacks it head on in one of his Kyuubi forms.
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is really great, it does seem like some of the scenes look similar to a naruto doujin i read once. hope to see tsunade soon
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-claps-
This one gets a 10
You fleshed out everything perfectly and the way you showed it made it seem like Flashbacks ^_^
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very enticing, at some point you may want to reveal or aside to the actual capture form the battlefield, given Sakura's abilities and all ^^
I give this chap a 9
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. This story just got, like, a hundred times better. Your first chapter was a vague introduction that covered the war in such a way that I really had no idea in what direction the story was headed. I'm really intrigued now. Keep up the good work!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's definitatly a very gripping start, it pulls others in. Some flashbacks or Asides may be needed to reveiw some of the backstory that lead to the main battle, as well as at some point, fleshing out the Naruto/Sasuke battle.
In my opinion anyway lol. Maybe some point doing some battle focuses on particular match ups can work as well ^_^
I give it an 8 :D
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wha.. what happened to Sakura?! You can't write a cliff hanger with a conclusion attached!! What the hell??
I'm just going to assume you will update this again. Do it. Do it quickly! I can't take this kind of stress.
(lol)
I'm just going to assume you will update this again. Do it. Do it quickly! I can't take this kind of stress.
(lol)