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A nice start. I dont see your direction yet, but Im going to stick with you to see where we're going. And if you need a beta you can contact me missbri88 at hotmail dot com

Please critique me, huh? I've heard that one before, I'll be totally honest. It was a good start, there is not much to go one SasuNaru wise but, you showed some good character development. I like when Sasuke can be a child, even one who is afraid of silly things like thunderstorms. I also like it when Itachi is a kind older brother and actively takes care of his relationship with his brother and nurtures the fact that his little brother looks up to him. You also managed to show the character of his parents with not much written about them. I wish it were a little longer but I am curious to see where this is going.