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for Our Lives

by Raelyn

schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!!
person moodysavage
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That got me immediately. I started crying at the end of that first sequence. I think this story is perfect just the way it is. You have quite a way with making the reader connect to your characters. Some people can write a ton and the reader just can't connect or care about the characters. But you...you can write something so short & I CARE about the characters. That's true talent. Please keep writing because I love your writing.
person Timber
schedule May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Raelyn
You have such a gift!! Your words make me cry my head off in grief or grin like an idiot over how happy I am with the story!! This story had me doing both!! First part had me in tears and in total denial that it was happening and feeling helpless with the characters to do anything about it. Then some serious grief at the complete finality it made me feel. Then the last part and the looking forward to how it would unfold just had me glued to my computer monitor. I just love this whole concept of them finding each other again and again!!! There is just something really romantic and sweet about that!! Its like they have so much love that one life time is not enough to express it!! HAPPY This made me really happy!!!
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii! Really a great story!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAWWW!!
Oh my GOD!
I was near tears, and I don't know why!
This was, like.. perfect! can't beleive it!
Could I ask you to write a sequel?
I'd love to hear more about how those two handle each other in 'our' time.
Thank you so so much for this fic, I'm all mushy now :)
Even though I don't beleive in soulmates.. weird, huh?
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really liked that. At first I was not sure and then the transition and having them meet up was done really well, Iliked how Naruto tested it by just the one word, "Bastard?" :) I like the ending too, but at the same time I wish there was a bit more.
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was so cute, I want to read more. The beginning with them in old Konoha and their baby girl, that was awesome, I wanna read more of that. I wanna know what happened, how they had the baby, how they were so easily killed. And then when they meet again, I could feel the connection that two have shared both in the past and right now in the present. I wanna know how their date is going to go, I wanna see everyone's reactions, especially Sakura's and Ino's. I love reincarnation stories especially when it involves soul mates and when those soul mates are Sasuke and Naruto. Great job, did I mention that I wished there was more?
person babe
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that has got to be he sweetest thing ever! nice.........