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Oh my god!
That was so scary!!
Narutos thoughts just didn't seems right either, when he was pacing the hallways :s
I can't believe it.. It was.. really well written! I almost felt like screaming at Naruto
that his thoughts were clearly royally fucked up..
I almost thought that Naruto would try to kill him again when Sasuke cut him free.
This is a bloody awesome fic!
I worship you man xD

Um, I'm not sure why you think that ending is open. Maybe because Sasuke and Naruto haven't really resolved their relationship? Well, in any case, I think bits of it were rushed, what with Naruto suddenly getting possessed and in the space of a few minutes getting cured of it. But I absolutely loved the way you did it, the resons for everything, how screwed up Madara was but in a way that was both extremely creepy and extremely believable for the time that he lived in. I was very pleasantly surprised (not sure why since it's you) at how well put together this story is and how well done the horror was. Well, maybe it's because I've read so many, and seen so many bad B horror flicks that this was so different. But I know it's good because of the style, the construction of the events, and the way you laid them out. I really liked that it was both Sasuke, and then later Naruto, who were possessed by seperate ghosts. Oh, and Itachi before that was a nice touch, especially as it made it harder for sasuke to grasp what was happening, both because Itachi really was his brother just as Madara really killed his younger brother, and also because of how stoic and empty Itachi was normally. Boy, this is getting long. Well, I truly loved this piece, and can even forgive the short length, definitely, with the way you ended it and the way you used really great elements of horror and proper build up to it all.

aaaaccckkkkkk!!!!!!!! How could you LEAVE it like that??? omg that last chapter was way intense and had me jumping in my seat, still didnt get to read any smex, but sooo kay, cause the tension and the creepiness factor did a wonderful job of keeping me totally glued to the screen, I LOVED it, sorry it ended, and ended in an open way, but WOW you sure know how to keep a person in suspence, WONDERFUL job, wonderful story and awesome writing, ty ty ty for the terrific read, much huggles and smiles and ty's Mija..:-)

When does the ObiKaka action come in!Sorry, I just love that pairing and please, please, please write Kakashi as the uke!

wow. this was really good. it had me glued to the screen till i finished it all. less than two hours (slight ADD involvement) but it was soo good and very well written, with only like one or two gramatical errors. but other than that here:

*CHIBI Sango gives truckload of cookies*
and i dont want you to choke, so ill give u a cow ^_^

thanks!

Great story, as always. The eyeball-less ghost freaked me out some though.

I was wondering how you would wrap it up. And it was really well done! I liked the story a whole heap. Thanks for writing it! :D

Hello! Sorry about taking so long to review. I loved the little touches of Sasuke opening up more, and only to Naruto. I think Orochimaru, despite his seeming to be a great therapist, should have been booted out the moment everyone realized how uncomfortable Naruto was with him in the house, I don't care that he actually didn't do anything. But maybe there will be a satisfying closure to that. I like that Sasuke is finally delving more into what he is seeing and talking about it, makes me remember that this is a ghost story and not just him going crazy. It came at the right time. I'd like to know more about that, see more of him fighting off sleep because there's a creepy boy in the corner of the room, staring at him without eyes. But I'll settle for him talking it over with Naruto. And I wonder, with it now obvious that he isn't crazy, whether or not his father was actually insane. I know we've talked about it, but I haven't seen the last chapter yet, so there are still questions. I like that, it means I definitely have to read on to get everything resolved. A great chapter, especially Sasuke's confidence after their kiss. :=D

poor sasuke!!hope naruto will help him

poor sasuke, hope naruto will help him