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You have a fondness for revealing the psychological and emotional complexity of the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke from Naruto's point of view. Why is that? It always seems as though Naruto is treating his emotions like polite company.

Anyway, great tale, as always.

Yea, it's here! Finally! Personally, I love that you inject a lot of emotionality in your work. It makes it much more intriguing to read. I absolutely love the snobbish and arrogant rich boy complex from Sasuke. It fits him so well and is perfect for a spoiled rich boy. I've seen other stories that never even touch the possiblity, or pull in the haughtiness of the manga but write it off as Sasuke being rich and, because of that, a veritable asshole to Naruto the entire way through. You know how I hate romances that use the abuse as some sort of attractiveness, especially if that author's version of Naruto is decidely NOT a masochist. I can't wait to see more, to get into the subtle suspense that it so artful coming from you. I absolutely love this story, and anything else you do with the supernatural.

If I could request a fic from you dealing with anything from that genre, I would never let up, you do it so well. I like Itchi here too, for as little as we see him. He's done well, not the egomaniacal maniac or sadistic torture rapist as he is in so many other stories. but there's still something off about him that Naruto picks up on; I think it's great. I love that you've got Naruto's inherent senitivity to others feelings as well as his innate ability to read people well. Oh, and Kakashi and Obito, both alone and when interacting with each other, are great too.

I can't wait for the next part, doesn't matter that I've alreaday read it. Update soon!