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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gods you kept Ten Ten-chan alive im so happy thank you thank you thank you i will be looking for the ne3xt chapter
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, Please update soon. Way to go.
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice i like this tale no one makes a strong Hinta-chan or at least very few people do and seeing her strong is a nice change so *bows low* many thanks
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WoW I just stubled over this story and I really love it!!! I really hope that the team will get going soon cause they really have to save Naruto!!! Poor guy beeing tortured and everything!!!! I really hope to hear from you soon!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lily Conflagration Eye?
Wow. It sounds so poetic, I can actually picture it being a real Narutoverse bloodline limit. Most fanfics give the bloodlines names that are actually too descriptive, and they don't sound like something Kishimoto would come up with at all (the only bloodline limits that basically explain their abilities in the name are the elemental bloodlines like Mokuton and Hyouton), but this one sounds like something he'd invent!
I really wonder what it does. I doubt it was meant to be anything significant to the plot, just something mentioned in passing to help with Tsunade's example, but a bloodline that gives you different colored eyes sounds so unique, and with a name like Lily Conflagration, I really am curious as to what its capable of.
Might you give just a brief description at the beginning of one of your future chapters?
Here's hoping Hinata learns Naruto is alive next chapter. He really needs some rescuing, and I don;t even want to think of what poor Tenten is enduring.
Wow. It sounds so poetic, I can actually picture it being a real Narutoverse bloodline limit. Most fanfics give the bloodlines names that are actually too descriptive, and they don't sound like something Kishimoto would come up with at all (the only bloodline limits that basically explain their abilities in the name are the elemental bloodlines like Mokuton and Hyouton), but this one sounds like something he'd invent!
I really wonder what it does. I doubt it was meant to be anything significant to the plot, just something mentioned in passing to help with Tsunade's example, but a bloodline that gives you different colored eyes sounds so unique, and with a name like Lily Conflagration, I really am curious as to what its capable of.
Might you give just a brief description at the beginning of one of your future chapters?
Here's hoping Hinata learns Naruto is alive next chapter. He really needs some rescuing, and I don;t even want to think of what poor Tenten is enduring.
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey cool story when r u gonna put up a new cht
I'll be waiting :)
I'll be waiting :)
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pleease do more soon I'm totally hook now XD
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo!!! Rescue time!!! :D
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's always good to see Hinata standing up to her father, and between Shino and Kurenai she's strengthening her support for whatever is coming. I hope this Shashu is referring to Naruto, but if not I'm sure he'll lead Hinata to him. Just how much will torture have affected him, and why did his captors see the need to torture him? Do you host this story anywhere else? For example, a plce where I can be notified of updates?
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HELLS yea!!!!!! that chappie was awesome! hope u update soon.