rate_review Reviews

Second chapter in and I'm still impressed with how great you made the mission. It seems to tangible, like something that could really happen in the mundane world of everyday missions. I love Naruto's tenseness regarding the welfare of his teammates. It speaks volumes of his maturity in this, aside from his obvious dropping of the fools mask. Nothing about this story is too obvious and it makes for a really good read. I can't wait to find out how the shit hits the fan and how Naruto got captured.

Keep up the great work!

I'm really enjoying this a lot!!

Keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed this first chapter, it is very well written and I can tell it's the beginning of a great story. NarutoxHinata stories have become rare lately, kudos on keeping the pairing alive. I can't wait to see where this goes next.