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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great 2nd chapter, I like how you show that Sasuke really loves Naruto.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon.
Okay?
Okay?
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Sasuke....
And who doesn't have their boyfriends phone# as an emergency contact....OMG!!!
Post another soon!
And who doesn't have their boyfriends phone# as an emergency contact....OMG!!!
Post another soon!
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeeeee continue! While I think that this would be fine as a one-shot I think this has bigger potential if you continue it.
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This must be continued! You can't be so cruel as to leva us in the dark about Naruto's fate. So shoo go write NOW!!! :)
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooo poor Naruto and poor Sasuke who is waiting! Why couldn't he have taken a cab? You have to continue this you HAVE to!!!
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just woke up babe and decided to snoop on here, when I saw that you put up a new fic I couldn't resist. I really enjoyed the first chapter to this; the detail and description are amazing.
Poor Naruto, I mean I'm glad that he helped that girl out and really it would be so out of character for Naruto not to. I just wish that instead of running off she would have at least called for help or got the police (those men should be arrested even if she didn't realize that they were going to hurt Naruto). But I suppose if she had done that well, there would be no plot for the fic, which I love *huge grin*
I hope that Sasuke will find out soon so that he doesn't wonder what happened to Naruto, I mean I know at this point he's not worried but I'm sure if he knows Naruto well enough he'll eventually realize that something happened. But the details in this…I enjoyed how you incorporated things that happened earlier in the fic with the end, like mentioning that Iruka was always on the phone and then later the medics couldn't reach him because his line was busy...bad Iruka, he needs to get call waiting :)
It will be interesting to see how Naruto reacts to his whisker marks now when he wakes up and I can’t wait to see what happens between him and Sasuke. Even if this fic isn’t a happy fic I still love it and want to read more.
I miss you babe!!! Two more weeks and then I’m free *tackles and glomps*
Cai
Poor Naruto, I mean I'm glad that he helped that girl out and really it would be so out of character for Naruto not to. I just wish that instead of running off she would have at least called for help or got the police (those men should be arrested even if she didn't realize that they were going to hurt Naruto). But I suppose if she had done that well, there would be no plot for the fic, which I love *huge grin*
I hope that Sasuke will find out soon so that he doesn't wonder what happened to Naruto, I mean I know at this point he's not worried but I'm sure if he knows Naruto well enough he'll eventually realize that something happened. But the details in this…I enjoyed how you incorporated things that happened earlier in the fic with the end, like mentioning that Iruka was always on the phone and then later the medics couldn't reach him because his line was busy...bad Iruka, he needs to get call waiting :)
It will be interesting to see how Naruto reacts to his whisker marks now when he wakes up and I can’t wait to see what happens between him and Sasuke. Even if this fic isn’t a happy fic I still love it and want to read more.
I miss you babe!!! Two more weeks and then I’m free *tackles and glomps*
Cai
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it would be a CRIME if you leave it there. oh wow i would really like you to continue. what is iruka doing on the phone!!!!!!! don't they know about call-waiting. oh how will sasuke find out. YOU NEED TO CONTINUE!!!!!! please ^_^
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!!! Please continue this story because i want to see what happens to Naruto and his injuries. Iruka may feel guilty if he finds out that he had been on the phone gossiping for so long that he couldnt be with Naruto at the hospital earlier and Sasuke for remembering the ambulance he saw and the thoughts of Naruto not "being on time to save his life." This is really going to be a great story and i cant wait for the next chapter. X3
Yes please continue it::D
Yes please continue it::D
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. It's always the good ones who get taken down and I think Naru deserves his chance at happiness. Besides I can't see Sasu taking being stood up sitting down.