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for Still Standing

by TheSimi

schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
;_; Mewwwwwww!!!!!! PLease continue. The emotions in this fic must be completed. Be it death or the fight to survive, it can't just stop. So please continue the story as it stands right now, it's at a peak but teetering hopelessly.
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Please please write more!

The whole one-shot thing would have been devastatingly perfect, but I really want to see if Naruto lives and what happens with Sasuke. The busy tone was an ironic aspect too, which I loved.

Please please you have to continue this! ^^
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!!!!!!! OMG!!! CONTINUE!! *O.O* (picture of me glued to the screen)
You can't leave it like that, I will cry if you do!
This story is unbelievable, I was literally shaking from anticipation, I can't wait to see how things will turn out.
Will Sasuke find out, and when? Will Naruto be alright? If he does, will there be any physical damage? Amnesia or comatose? Will they still be together? Will Sasuke propose? Argh, this is making me all the more anxious, that was an evil cliffhanger yet a great first chapter, awesomely done!
Otroligt! Vilken unik, intressant och spännade berättelse! Snacka om att ha talang.
Du måste fortsätta, för mig och Itachi? ;P
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You can't just leave him not knowing what happened. A second chapter is really the way to go with this one if Naruto dies. A third if he survives.(1 vote for survival here)
person hup
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please finish. someone needs to know if Naruto will make it.
person LadyWolf
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Doesn't he have Sasuke's # in his phone as an emergency contact too!!! He can not die!!!!

Don't let him die!!! I hate death fics!

Post soon!
person Charm and Strange
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WRITE IT! 8D
I will review this every day and give you internet cookies if you keep going!!! It already has me on edge, and it's just the damn first chapter!...Though if you kill Naruto I might have to kill YOU... >:( lol
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes.

Please update.