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by HeartlessArchAngel

person skyglazingMaro
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my please don't tell me that's the end *sob* it can't be
person yrensil
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i read this one before and looked forward for the next chapters.but they never did, so i just lost interest on waiting. i was a bit surprise to see this again and was more surprise that it almost made me cry... seriously! not most of the stories make me feel this way... i could feel so much love between sasuke and naruto... its like a perfect love story... you could feel the love and pain that they were having... it almost felt real to me... i just hope that this story will continue to progress and will end without breaking my heart in two... i just wish that it will have a happy ending...
person Tenshi89
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
is awesome! it made me cry at the end. is there going to be another chapter? i want them to end together!!
person Angel
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Made a wimpering, weeping, sook out of me and Sasuke is such a bloody idiot! I loved the reversal of roles where Naruto is sleeping around on a faithful, waiting Sasuke. I love his unflailing love for a hard-headed Sasuke but esp how a childish taunt plagues and what is a throwaway tease to one, is the world to another! That gut...
person Shinigami24
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* Idiot. Sasuke's rejection may be the sole reason why Naruto's relationships never last long. Good grief-Naruto has turned into a player! That's bad news! Because-sooner or later Naruto will end up pissing off the wrong person and someone will get seriously hurt...
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-sniffle-
More -puppy eyes-
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GASP! I'm so hooked!

I actually want to see how the Sasuke in chapter two will evolve into the Sasuke of chapter one. Little bastard...going to confess to Hinata. I hope he doesn't or else I'll throw something at him. IT'S NARUTO YOU WANT!

...*cough* Sorry about that...

Anyways, I absolutely love the story so far, and it was really left at a cliffie...so please please update soon! ^^
person Ivy
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
person Nanin
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is progressing.
Please continue.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was super cute! I hope there is more!