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look i am sorry but i can't figure out how to send you a messege, you seriously need to date your work so i know when you last updated this, if its a dead story i dun want to watch it, though i will come back to it, please??

I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the great work!

Brilliant! Love where you took it this chapter. Although there were minor mistakes, it's understandable given the fact that your editor was 'doped up'. I hope she feels better soon.
This is my second time reading it, the whole time I was away from my computer (a grand total of 3 days, aka eternity) I kept thinking about your story. I'm dieing to know what happens next. Update soon. :)

Yo, Sorry it took so long to read and review this chapter, it was alright, I liked it, felt like it was too short, I want to know what happens next like you wouldn't believe, second question here, is your editor out of the hospital? sucks that she had to go in. and last but not least, I have another story that's MUCH longer on FF.net now. if you want to check it out, so far people seem to like it though it's only 10 chapters long, (about 3-5K words per chapter) so even thought it's short it's coming along. *shameless self promotion time* check it http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5125619/1/Cries_Unheard

Nice update! Hope your editer gets better!

I think Naruto to say to Hinata "On second thought let's do a tactical retreat."
"Where?" asks Hinata.
"To Baa chan quickly your father is not going to need his all see eyes. He'll hear about it" replies Naruto." Beside it will be good to have some back up for a change."
Good story so far. Please update soon.

I'm hoping this is the lead in to a major fight scene with all of them just because I thinkit needs a bit of action, so far so good, still reading I'll be updating mine in a few days if I get the time, so do keep your eyes open.

AAAAHHHHHHH!!! Damn it! How DARE you cliffhang me!!! I'll definately be back for the next chapter!!! Lets hope Neji doesn't kill Naruto for doin the hibbity dibbity with Hinata!!!

Nice work, you don't usually see this good of a story in an AFF. Keep it up!

good as always comrade, I decided to hit the story and re-read it all while I'm taking a quick break from writing the next chapter in the one youve been following, and then once I finish that I might write a second chapter for the newer one I'm working on But decided to read yours again because I had forgotten how it had started lol not sleeping often does horrible things to a persons memory like that lol I'm lucky I remember what month it is, let alone anything else. but it's good keep it up I'll keep reading once again let me know when you update, thank you.