rate_review Reviews

GREAT CHAPTER!
cant wait for the next update

cool an update :}

hmmm...i cant decide which i love more, the smut or the fluff.

well either way great story.

im interested in wat happens nxt.

sorry it took a bit to review it finally, I read your editors story as well, and it's nice, this one the updates great I'll be waiting on another chapter, and you know...you can't let me update too much more than you, so that means you better hurry cuz I just uploaded a new story, (not new chapter I'm now working on two different stories.) so I like where this is going. I love both the fluff and the smutty side, it's most excellent, But if you would you know what to do lol new story is calling for feedback (just ignore that I made it seem like I'm starting a small rivalry with the stories, was a joke, I'm by no means being competitive, just been writing a lot lately.)

OMFG! YAY! AN UPDATE! I have missed this story! It's so cute! Now:

“You haven‘t come out to chase tail (A/N lol) with me for ages, you’re obviously not dating so you have a fuck buddy!”

ROTFLMAO!!!!!! That (a/n lol) THREW me! It was so hilarious! LOL! Omg, and OMG KIBA AND HIS BIG FUCKING MOUTH! I was like, "YARG! KIBA! STFU!!!!" I mean, I am CRAZY for Kiba (dogs in general XD) but I was ugh, muzzle him!!! Omg, Hinata was SOOOOOOO cute at the end!!! That just made me grin BIG time! Keep up the great work~!!!

Just read over your story again, paritally out of boredom, and mostly because it was a good way to pass time where as I do like the story so far, in other news, my story got a chapter 3, finally, I've been busy with a bunch of other things so it kinda got the back seat for a while there. but it's updated now. and another hopefully soon to come, so Heads up on that, I hope to see an update on yours soon as well. anyways. I've got some writing to do, chapter to at least start etc. so I'll be back to check if you've updated over the next few days. (and probably longer) if you update Let me know alright? The email posted in the header to the chapters is a good way to let me know (that way even if I'm not browsing here I check the email frequently.)

worlds quickest update. Also I have a question for you, You mentioned your not so official editor has a Naru Hina fan fic as well on FF.net well Might I get the editors display/link to the story I'm interested to give it a read. I'm very much a fan of the pairing. the others in my fic will start to develop soon as well. But I mentioned in my A/N for the last chapter that the next might not be long well it really wasn't....same morning. so, Update happened. also, any estimate to when this gem of yours will be seeing it's update?

Really excellent... I would love to continue reading it

Well I want to see where this goes, I Like it so far I'm gonna wait until the second chapter gets up before I rate it though, in any case, Mines not so explicit but if you'd care to give mine a review it's only a few stories down from this one...I'd appreciate it.