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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much fun and so well written. Please continue indefinitely. :) THX!
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I didn't mean anything specific when I said confusing! Just in general I guess, but I am understanding the surroundings and plot as the story goes on. So no fretting from you my friend!
Loved the new chapter. Though you blindsided me when you said they were twelve! For some reason I thought they were older? Hmm. I'm just delusional of course.
I love the little attraction thing that's starting between Naruto and Sasuke. Definitely promising.
Looking out for the next chapter! ^^
Loved the new chapter. Though you blindsided me when you said they were twelve! For some reason I thought they were older? Hmm. I'm just delusional of course.
I love the little attraction thing that's starting between Naruto and Sasuke. Definitely promising.
Looking out for the next chapter! ^^
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that, cyber storys are so rare... and I like the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto so far! Keep up the good work! :)
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alright, another cool chapter. Make the pirates those sound kids from the chunnin exams. That one hunchbacked guy dosu or seki or something like that. He would make a cool alien! Although the spider guy from the Sound 4 would also make a creepy alien too!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool! I like scifi stories and this one seems to be starting very good. Thank you for a great chapter and look forward to more.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're right - there isn't enough Naruto Cyberpunk out there. I'm glad you've chosen to write your own. Great first chapter!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay space pirates and laser and other cool gadgets. I like the start and am interested in reading more. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very interesting start, a little confusing, but nonetheless intriguing. Naruto seems like an awesome character. I abosultely can't wait to see how you develop their relationship and the plot.
Please update soon! ^^
Please update soon! ^^
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do like. Do like a lot. This is your first fic? Then it's an awesome start. You've got me hooked and I can't wait to see more~