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for The Art of Patience

by yolotengo

schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I wanna say that I absolutely love your story and I've read it so many times but there seems to be a problem with chapter number 36. like not the one with the title as 36 but the one that the site numbered as 36. It won't show up. Like it says that that page is down which is weird cause i can bring up all the other chapters. I'm just wondering if this is only happening to me or if the site screwed that chapter up or something. please get back to me on this asap. thnx
schedule March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I created an account to review the story. Ok, sorry for mistakes, I'm German, my English isn't that good.
I loved the story. Even if I prefer canon characters in the origin manga-universe, but nevertheless, that story was kinky, georgeous, perverted, funny, deep, well written and absolutely cool.

Besides the brillant sex-part, there was so much love in this story! I read a lot of crappy porn stuff, but your story is just hot, because of the -sorry,I can't find an English expression for that- inner relation of the three (?). I hope you understand.

From the first chapter, I didn't want that story to end, so I read slowly, what means a lot, because I'm normally a very speedy reader.
Thanks for making my day!

Und schön weiter schreiben!

person Rin
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAH! been reading this from the beginning (twice now) and must say AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the squeal! *dances around happily*
person red book
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More Sai! I hope his appearance continues in the sequel... as well as Kiba's. Sweet ending.
person nivell
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope that there will be a sequel! Great read!
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Can`t wait for the epilogue to come out. You said something about more then just an epilogue. If that is true I will be great full. I have greatly enjoyed this story and was always eagerly waiting for the next chapter. The writing & descriptions were amazing I always felt like I was there too.
person akira
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this final chapter, i love that it was long, i think is always better read long chapters that short ones, still i feel this final chapter a little bit russhed in comparation with the rest of the story, but it was good too. an epilogue will fo find with this.

Anyways, Thanks for sharing your story with us, i enjoy all the way, that is for sure.

XOXO
Aki
person qwerty
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw. Great chapter! I can't wait for the epilogue.
Great job!!
person blue chair
schedule December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sai?
person Akira
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so happy you updated, so sad it was short, at least for me, but it was a good one.