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Awww.. I loved Naruto and Sasuke's passionate gentile lovemaking. Sasuke was so vulnerable in this chapter. I loved it.

Keep up the great work!

Yey, next chapter coming soon XD. And the apology chapter was cute and very sweet and I'm happy they both got to have sex without Sasuke needing pain to make it good for him XD *shoos away silly sadist side and fluffy comes back full force*. And the nervousness of finding out Itachi wasn't in the room with them was cute. And hiding from a dog, too XD (I sympathize, I'm also scared of big dogs ~_~).

And Itachi gets a big cake for being a smart cookie, I was like 'wth is he picking up that scalpel for >_>? Going old man Oro hunting XD?'. He's really thoughtful and pretty dang smart, actually. I hope they can all wake up to pancakes and large fluffy dogs :D. Once again.... glad that the next chappy will be soonish :D.

XD I'm sort of with the other poster who said maybe Sasuke should just be Kiba's sub. He's gotten the shortest end of the stick in this chapter, choked, scared witless, unable to evoke any emotions or snapping out of it responses, scratched, hit, then was witness to a moment between Naruto and Itachi XD. If I was him, and I ain't and thankfully he has his inner self respect, but I'd be feeling like eight layers of not good enough combined with third wheel XD. Add to the fact that he doesn't know anything (about Orochi or seemingly anyone related to Naruto, and even his own uncle who he never met till today. He only seems to be picking up signals, and I feel oddly like he's in an even more vulnerable position than Itachi never mind his physical position in the threesome given his lack of knowledge. This chapter pretty much cemented it, too).

Haha. I think Sasuke, in this, is the character I've latched onto emotionally XD. I always latch onto the characters on the short end, cause it's fun (either to see them miserable and getting into worse situations so I can cry about it which I enjoy for some reason, or see things get better so I can cheer for them which I enjoy equally XD).

Is it all an exciting build up to something 8D? Will Sasuke voice any jealousy or just bear it silently? Give up? Keep on doing what he's doing? Why did Itachi pick up that scalpel? So curious XDDD.

I felt so sorry for poor Sasuke in the last chapter! Getting scratched and punched by Naruto when he was trying to keep him away from getting into bigger trouble..maybe Sasuke should be with Kiba, ;p

Can't wait for the next chappy!

To tell you the truth I was never a big ItaNaruSasu fan, (I'm a die hard ItaSasu fan :D ) but this story really hooked me in. I just love how you chracterize them and everything. I can't wait til the next chapter 8)

Oh, my god that was awesome. I am so glad that Kiba hit Oorchimaru. That was brilliant.

OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVE EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!
But ine thing that definitly needs to be said is that KIBA is soooooo awesome!!!
Come on we need morer Kiba Action!!!Maybe get him a sub too???????
PLEASE I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE HIM!!!!!!!!
THANKS!!!
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I love the update bad guys left out cold, always a good thing. Now need to get Sai away to, maybe with Kiba. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!!

Is Naruto's old Dom Pein? Jiraiya?
Good start to the party. I love how Naruto puts subs and Doms alike in their places!
Keep going!

Orichimaru