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for The Art of Patience

by yolotengo

schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh the suspense will kill me i tell you lol. i have 3 guesses - oro, pein or hmmm danzou? hmm i have no idea, i'll go crazy guessing. put me out of my misery quick!!!
person qwerty
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH! I love the outfits! They're so hott!
All this build-up to the party is killing me!
Keep going!
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo!

I wonder what sort of sadistic treat Naruto has for Sasuke in the way of clothing. >:) lol

Keep up the good work!
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. i can't wait to see their outfits. and i can't wait until naru meets sai again ^_^
person qwerty
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to see the outfits!
Great chapter! Keep going!
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It is brilliant. Can't wait for the outfit chapter and then the party.
person qwerty
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for the party!
person Hanami
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but I just feel too miserable for Sasuke in this XD. I know what being second best is, and being it in love (or everything, for that matter) has to suck. Terribly. XD It was almost enough to make me cry, really, even if he's a bad sub. I am frustrated/sad/unhappy on his behalf.

And yet at the same time, I'm the sort of person to hope that he goes/leaves... either to find someone whom he doesn't have to compete with a perfect brother with or.... or wind up sad in the streets/alone....then I'll cry about it and shake my fists ._.;. Because really, I can't see how this can possibly get better for Sasuke. He almost seems to be hated or maybe just barely tolerated (and I can't even say tolerated for Itachi's sake. XD Maybe I missed it, but I didn't get the feeling he could give a flying flip), and Itachi is just better than him so... he's still second place e_e. Hurhurhur. I shouldn't comment mid-read, but I can't help it XD.
person Hanami
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray, okay. I feel a little less like crying for Sasuke now, at least XD. Which is good.

But Madara... is bad XD. And now I'm super terribly curious as to why Sasuke's such a pain slut o_o. I can't figure out if he just got pain and pleasure mixed up early on or if he hates himself and has major self issues or if he's just a simple plain masochist no explanation XD.

I'm also curious of how big of an age gap exists still between Itachi and Sasuke and Naruto. Sasuke seems a lot younger than both of them. Maybe because of his.... impatience? But I'm just curious.
person qwerty
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I can't wait to see what Madara has up his sleeve!
Keep going!