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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story!I like this story a lot and look forward to more. Thank you for a great chapter.
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh what the hell did naru go through O.O his former Dom was a sick fellow. is it Oro? that's the first person that came to mind.
and the issue with sasu it just seems like he isn't wanted by naru. i know itachi is his fav but it's like he doesn't like sasuke at all!!! is it the fact that he is trying to break him out of being a pain-slut because of all he has been through? i hope sasuke gets some love later on, i want naru to keep him as well.
and the issue with sasu it just seems like he isn't wanted by naru. i know itachi is his fav but it's like he doesn't like sasuke at all!!! is it the fact that he is trying to break him out of being a pain-slut because of all he has been through? i hope sasuke gets some love later on, i want naru to keep him as well.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The moment between Itachi and Naruto was so touching! You usually read Itachi as a dom in d/s stories so this take on him is refreshing ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wOOt. :> Can't wait for more of this and haha Sasuke keeps acting like a douche at the wrong times.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It would love to see their bonding ceremony.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! so fucking hot!!!!!!! please update soon!!! i wanna know the punishment for Sasuke
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww hot! I want to see Sasuslut taking it hard!!
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* i finally get the chance to read chapter 2, and like, fifteen minutes later, i see you've added more!!!
i love fast updates, but readers can't be bitchy about the slow ones, either. lol
This is looking good and i'd love to see more. if you'd like help doing quick edits pick on me, i'm good on grammer, punctuation, spelling- the general stuff. ^^
Keep writing!!
i love fast updates, but readers can't be bitchy about the slow ones, either. lol
This is looking good and i'd love to see more. if you'd like help doing quick edits pick on me, i'm good on grammer, punctuation, spelling- the general stuff. ^^
Keep writing!!
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! naurto as Dom is so fucking hot and to the two sexy as hell uchiha brothers that's just the icing on the cake... i alwayz thought that itachi would make the perfect sub though.....great job....can't wait for the next update.
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i think he was way to harsh on itachi. he is a very good sub after all. but that was way too harsh. maybe he can make it up to him?