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for The Art of Patience

by yolotengo

person Nami
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Arrrr, Sasuke ;,;! You poor little thing DX. And just after your training started(And +50 sad points for being bait with benefits o_o;). Madara was refined skeevy as ever, and Oro... I enjoy seeing him riled up cause he deserves it.

Why do I envision Hulk Naruto and Sharp Rage-tachi now? N'awww, they'll be all worried :(. Ps, dounut bit was funny. Kisame does well at making me grin when he's laughing at Oro and pissing him off. Except when he's kidnapping Sasuke's (though them doughnut and coffee bills don't pay for themselves).
person meow
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:o ooommm poor sasuke :( Naruto's gonna be pissed! UPDATE AGAIN soon XD Love this story
person qwerty
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no Sasuke! :(
Keep going!
person jason
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woah hot! haha hope you update again soon.
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh.. Look out Sasuke!!!
person angelj232000
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and an update so soon. YAY!!!!! I have been so scared to open up the newest chapters because I am so worried about Sasuke being kidnapped. With his anxiety about his uncle I an very worried. None the less I will keep reading as these 3 are so hot together.
person meow
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
>:] wooo *fans self* O.O
I hope you update again sooon! Cant wait to see if they get sasuke ;P im evviillll
person Kena
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! It's driving me mad! I really want to see how Naruto and Itachi react when Sasuke goes missing! This was a really good chapter though, Sasuke is getting cuter all the time....kidnap soon? ;)
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter and so what if its slow some times slow makes it better (kinda like "Cleaning" ones plate)
person jason
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hope to read more soon. :)