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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear the bad guys still dont under stand that they cant walk all over people like Naruto when ever they want too
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't going to read your story when I saw how many chapters it was (me being a fan of one and two-shots) but your summary was really interesting. I am glad I gave this a chance, your story is amazing. I absolutely love how detailed the characters and story are. Also, about the latest chapter with the strawberry thing, HAWT! Please continue to keep up the great work! I am totally looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Black Kisame and a necklace a character has never taken off since the first meeting someone, and being exchanged or given during slave ship? Someone's been reading D/s Naruto! Which ain't a bad thing at all.
But it's pretty cool, your fic I mean.
But it's pretty cool, your fic I mean.
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Visually stunning, but I think I'd pass on that dessert. Thanks anyway. ^^
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, i am not used with adultfiction so I have to look for the review tab hehe
anyway....... Damn it!!! You got me hanging their...
I love this, love your story and your smexy smuts & lemons haha...
anyway, I am not sure how I am going put this on some alert but I'll be chasing this story down for your next update! xxx
Cheers!
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anyway....... Damn it!!! You got me hanging their...
I love this, love your story and your smexy smuts & lemons haha...
anyway, I am not sure how I am going put this on some alert but I'll be chasing this story down for your next update! xxx
Cheers!
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was super hot! I can't stop thinking about the sexy image of strawberries coming out of Sasuke's ass and Itachi eating them!
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The milk part sounded fun, not sure about the strawberries. But since it is Sasuke, Itachi, and Naruto, sure go for it. I liked the character portrayal in the chapter, with what they were thinking and feeling. Good job on the chapter and story so far. Keep it going.
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm my mind is lost in a fog trying to think just what Naruto has planed for those to very naughty boys of his
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My threesome sense is tingling! Yea!
Unfortunately behind it looms the shadow of unrest because of the snake and Madara!
Unfortunately behind it looms the shadow of unrest because of the snake and Madara!
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mm but your not suppose to play with your food *evil glint in eyes* still food play is soo much fun thank you for giving me some ideas