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for The Art of Patience

by yolotengo

person qwerty
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting that Sasuke shows more outwardly consternation at Naruto's leaving than Itachi does. Naruto also latches onto the fact that it's Sai, instead of the Madara linkage, which in light of recent events, should be more concerning to Naruto.
Great chapter! Keep going!
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whatever their plan is, I hope that it doesn't come to pass. Will Kiba claim Sai? Nice build-up chapter, I'll be waiting for the next one.
person Nami
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Kaisame bad (:(? Boo.... oh well u_u. C'est la vie *hugs Kisa and scoots him away*.

But still, I can't wait to see the next chappy~! Sasuke, I'd be pissed too! I mean... really though. Naruto was a bit... silly running off like that. He just tattood Itachi and it's like..... well :|, wh... you ran off?
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! XD I really love this story, and can't wait to see what Itachi's tattoo is! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! :3
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. Apologies for not reviewing sooner. *bows* I wonder what the tatoo looks like. Keep up the good work.
person Nami
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH GAARA. You're so unintentionally cute.

I'm curious though, what was the tattoo of? I read it a second time to be sure and I don't know still :O. Oh wait, he said he's see it later, so I guess we get to see it later too :d.

And yay, evil plotting :D!
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. Gaara retains his silent intimidation. ^^
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to find out what the tattoo is. I am sure it is a most beautiful expression of what he feels for his princess. Ohh more drama. After the party I'm not sure if I can handle more!
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love sappy love stuff when the story calls for it and I think that you are right putting it in at that chapter. Thank you for a great story.
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D (waiting for part 2/3)