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September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Thanks so much!
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great shorts... they're all so cute it should be a crime!
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't go on without reviewing. It would be just so wrong and indecent of me, ne? I am so glad I stumbled onto these drabbles... I'm having writer's block right now... urrrgh, writer's block... but anyway sometimes reading other fics help me out so I was reading yours and I fell in love with the different relationships you created with the same two characters.
First Drabble: Meh, I knew the first drabble was supposed to be for a contest that had a certain word constraint but I wished there was more too it. I thought it cute that Naruto wanted Kakashi by his side as he became Hokage. As well as amusing that Kakashi is partly stepping down from the shinobi world so that Naruto could realize his dream all the more quickly instead of waiting for Kakashi to kick the bucket. It was too cute, all of it... but I didn't know whether it was at the beginning of their relationship or what.
Second Drabble: I like the excuse that Kakashi made to Naruto in order to be fed again. I like how Naruto and Kakashi had gotten into the habit of being fed and being the fed person and how it seemed arkward afterward after that was broken because there wasn't that familiar routine anymore. The indecision that Naruto had each time he thinks he is indirectly kissing Kakashi is adorable as how Kakashi gets his kiss from Naruto, too cute. I like when Kakashi teases him like that.
Third Drabble: The other chapter I like how Kakashi ends up luring Naruto into having phone sex... well radio sex with Naruto. I knew in the back of my head that any moment they could be interrupted on the radio but that was the sexy part about it too. Too cute, especially when Sai interrupts at the end. It also showed a more mature relationship between Kakashi and Naruto because they are familiar with each other enough that something random like asking for phone sex doesn't phase Naruto... too much like it might if they were freshly dating.
Fourth Drabble: I just finished the four drabble and that was cute too how they childishly fought over Iruka only to end up together. It amused me how they knew they both were any a way cockblocking each other although I think Naruto didn't have any real romantic interest in Kakashi. The fact that he was creeped out by Kakashi flirting with him was hilarious becuase that reminded me of that scene when Kakashi was trying to teach him how to control his wind element technique and Kakashi randomly said he liked him. The horror on his face and the imagined horror I'm imagining on Naruto's face now is priceless. Plus, I like a take charge kind of Naruto who knows what he wants it goes for it.
Meh, now will read more but all is love. You are one talented author.
First Drabble: Meh, I knew the first drabble was supposed to be for a contest that had a certain word constraint but I wished there was more too it. I thought it cute that Naruto wanted Kakashi by his side as he became Hokage. As well as amusing that Kakashi is partly stepping down from the shinobi world so that Naruto could realize his dream all the more quickly instead of waiting for Kakashi to kick the bucket. It was too cute, all of it... but I didn't know whether it was at the beginning of their relationship or what.
Second Drabble: I like the excuse that Kakashi made to Naruto in order to be fed again. I like how Naruto and Kakashi had gotten into the habit of being fed and being the fed person and how it seemed arkward afterward after that was broken because there wasn't that familiar routine anymore. The indecision that Naruto had each time he thinks he is indirectly kissing Kakashi is adorable as how Kakashi gets his kiss from Naruto, too cute. I like when Kakashi teases him like that.
Third Drabble: The other chapter I like how Kakashi ends up luring Naruto into having phone sex... well radio sex with Naruto. I knew in the back of my head that any moment they could be interrupted on the radio but that was the sexy part about it too. Too cute, especially when Sai interrupts at the end. It also showed a more mature relationship between Kakashi and Naruto because they are familiar with each other enough that something random like asking for phone sex doesn't phase Naruto... too much like it might if they were freshly dating.
Fourth Drabble: I just finished the four drabble and that was cute too how they childishly fought over Iruka only to end up together. It amused me how they knew they both were any a way cockblocking each other although I think Naruto didn't have any real romantic interest in Kakashi. The fact that he was creeped out by Kakashi flirting with him was hilarious becuase that reminded me of that scene when Kakashi was trying to teach him how to control his wind element technique and Kakashi randomly said he liked him. The horror on his face and the imagined horror I'm imagining on Naruto's face now is priceless. Plus, I like a take charge kind of Naruto who knows what he wants it goes for it.
Meh, now will read more but all is love. You are one talented author.
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
pure genius! i love this so much!
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love each and every one-shot you have written and can't wait to read the next one!
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it.
thank you.
thank you.
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Icha Icha Recon Review:
Well... this one was fun, wasn't it? lol I loved it! It was extremely hot... and perverted XD I like Pervy Kakashi, but not like sicko-pervy Kakashi, and you do the perfect pervy Kakashi, so woots! lol
i liked how you made naruto come in in the middle of words/sentences and cut himself off... cuz that is something VERY naruto lol And his observation that they weren't even phones makes me LOL every time I read it XD
That would totally have sucked for Naru if someone happened down the alley while he got off... but, ya know, i think he just might not give a damn at that point lol
anyways, this was awesome! i can't wait until you truly break your kaka/naru-cherry in an all out physical match XD
love ya tomo!
Well... this one was fun, wasn't it? lol I loved it! It was extremely hot... and perverted XD I like Pervy Kakashi, but not like sicko-pervy Kakashi, and you do the perfect pervy Kakashi, so woots! lol
i liked how you made naruto come in in the middle of words/sentences and cut himself off... cuz that is something VERY naruto lol And his observation that they weren't even phones makes me LOL every time I read it XD
That would totally have sucked for Naru if someone happened down the alley while he got off... but, ya know, i think he just might not give a damn at that point lol
anyways, this was awesome! i can't wait until you truly break your kaka/naru-cherry in an all out physical match XD
love ya tomo!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cockblock:
lmao... great title tomo ♥
this was super cute. i almost thought for a second it would end as a threesome. i was pleasantly surprised that it ended the way it did ^_^
I alwaysAlwaysALWAYS love a smarter/more observant Naruto. And Kakashi being just a smidge slower than he should be XP
Kakashi being backed against the tree was H.O.T. (and i don't mean the band XD)! nyaaaaaaaaa dominant!Naru is so f'n hot!!! I liked how Kakashi was slowly realizing the little things about Naruto and was thoroughly happy with him wanting to date Naruto over Iruka.
Also.... where DID the book and boxers go? XD
♥ya tomotan!!
lmao... great title tomo ♥
this was super cute. i almost thought for a second it would end as a threesome. i was pleasantly surprised that it ended the way it did ^_^
I alwaysAlwaysALWAYS love a smarter/more observant Naruto. And Kakashi being just a smidge slower than he should be XP
Kakashi being backed against the tree was H.O.T. (and i don't mean the band XD)! nyaaaaaaaaa dominant!Naru is so f'n hot!!! I liked how Kakashi was slowly realizing the little things about Naruto and was thoroughly happy with him wanting to date Naruto over Iruka.
Also.... where DID the book and boxers go? XD
♥ya tomotan!!
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was absolutely great! I'm a big fan of KakaNaru stories and there just aren't enough of them. Each one of these was highly enjoyable and I think I read them over several times again. Thanks!