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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry!!!!
(Claps hands together in front of face, head bowed) OMGosh, I don't know how I could have ever thought your story wasn't worth reading!! Man, I'm such an idiot! But, hey, at least I had the sense to come back and keep reading... five days later. ^^;
Love, love, loved it! I loved what you did with Sakura, everything she did was perfect, especially at the end, with her tearing off Naruto's collar. XDDDDDD (thumbs up!) Loved Naruto's last stand, his true character. Loved Sasuke's repentance, even if it was a bit awkward. Loved Hinata in the final chapter, amazing!
I could just keep going and going and going....about how glad I am that you wrote this and that I came back to read it through. It was epic, pure spun gold.
I'm sooo glad I read the sequel, and now i'm off to go reread it! Yay me! Can't wait for those one-shots you talked about. ;D
(Claps hands together in front of face, head bowed) OMGosh, I don't know how I could have ever thought your story wasn't worth reading!! Man, I'm such an idiot! But, hey, at least I had the sense to come back and keep reading... five days later. ^^;
Love, love, loved it! I loved what you did with Sakura, everything she did was perfect, especially at the end, with her tearing off Naruto's collar. XDDDDDD (thumbs up!) Loved Naruto's last stand, his true character. Loved Sasuke's repentance, even if it was a bit awkward. Loved Hinata in the final chapter, amazing!
I could just keep going and going and going....about how glad I am that you wrote this and that I came back to read it through. It was epic, pure spun gold.
I'm sooo glad I read the sequel, and now i'm off to go reread it! Yay me! Can't wait for those one-shots you talked about. ;D
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story was great!!!! Although they al had to suffer too mcuh for my liking!!! I really hope that there will be a happy ending for the sequal eith Naruto and Sasuke!!! I see you in the sequal^
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the story and my god tears are streaming down my face! That was so touching, hateful, regretful, sad and so much other things that really just made me want to kill Sasuke! lol I just absolutely love the story and wish you best of luck for ur others =]
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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story was AMAZING...ive been crying for like the past couple hours now..mostly silent tears, but at times almost light sobs...a beautiful and emotional fic...
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And now that I ran off and read the sequel to insure that there was indeed a happy ending for this storyline, I can properly review this story. As I said in my other review, this story is beautifully written. The raw and pure range of emotions makes this story a gem in of it's own right. Watching Sasuke go from the depths of depravity through the shock of the realization and into his deep regret and depression was wonderfully written. And Naruto was equally heartbreaking with his broken spirit and almost absolute obedience. Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I can give no higher praise, and will recommend this story to any in need of a deep, enthralling emotional ride through SasuNaru land. *grin wink* Thank you for writing this story. *bow with deep respect*
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I've read this story about 5 times since you first posted it on FF and it STILL makes me cry. As I'm sure I've said before, Innocence from Ashes is the perfect sequel.
I hope that the support you're getting from the reviews helps you overcome the writer's block you were suffering from (I think you mentioned it on a FF post months ago). I can't remember the third story in this plotline but I remember being disappointed when the updates stopped.
Always looking forward to more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.
I hope that the support you're getting from the reviews helps you overcome the writer's block you were suffering from (I think you mentioned it on a FF post months ago). I can't remember the third story in this plotline but I remember being disappointed when the updates stopped.
Always looking forward to more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you made me cry. It was brilliant even though I felt heartbroken for both Sasuke and Naruto, mostly Naruto though. Please make more breathtaking fict like this
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was amazed to see an entire 21 chapter story posted in one go that I just had to give it a shot and it didnt disappoint.
I was moved to tears more times than I can count in the last 6 or 7 hours of off and on reading. And the small joyful moments were priceless. I screamed and was deeply touched. This was absolutely beautiful. Im crying now even! lol. Amazing story and I cant wait to see the sequel.
Thank you so much for posting and sharing this. I could go on and on because TSoS was so awesome. Just... WOW!
I was moved to tears more times than I can count in the last 6 or 7 hours of off and on reading. And the small joyful moments were priceless. I screamed and was deeply touched. This was absolutely beautiful. Im crying now even! lol. Amazing story and I cant wait to see the sequel.
Thank you so much for posting and sharing this. I could go on and on because TSoS was so awesome. Just... WOW!
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to Adult Fan Fiction! I read this story over at Fan Fiction.net & loved it, actually love all your Sauske/Naruto stories. Glad to see you joining here. Well I hope everyone gives your story a look see & leaves a review, you might want to make it so anonymous reviewers can leave reviews too; folks here are a little lazy (I'm one lol) we'll leave a review but don't always log in (I logged in to review because I remember you saying saying over at Fan Fiction.net that you might come here to Adult but hadn't found how to get here yet & I remember you haven't been on the internet in a while due to computer issues). So I wanted to welcome you here & pass on some advice. Anyway glad to see you back to writing, missed reading your stuff, & I'm looking forward to see you post more of your stories here! Take care.
littleolmee
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littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, I just read to chapter 14 of this amazing story, and I just wanted to let you know that I'm loving this so far. I really loved Sakuras speech to Sasuke. It was so dead on appropriate. Thanks for posting! I'm going to go back and read some more. Looking forward to it!