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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was a good first night. He was welcomed to the new family with open arms, well at least from 2 of his new siblings.LOL Im like Naruto, i cant wait to see what happens tomorrow. Unlike him i bet he gets soaked. hehehe I like ur descriptions of everything they didnt suck to me.:)
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see what happens tomorrow ^.^ i like that family though kind of strange group though but hey they are all coll. i know kiba and naru are gonna get along just fine ^.^
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow very short chapter, not to much to go on, except that people keep kicking Naruto out and hes going to anew home with Umino which I asssume is Iruka??? it seems interesting, again the chapter was short so it would of been nice to have a bit more detail or plot in it but over all it was a great start and I look foward to more, ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.. interesting. The beginning is so like sweetangel18's in 'Finally Loved' that make me wonder if she is an insperation for this story. It's different enough but points much the same way. I can't wait to see how you take this sort of "spin" But be careful, the idea right now is close enough to be thought of as plagerism.
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, i think its shaped up to be a pretty great story and i look forward to who else is in Foster care with Iruka. This chapter made me cry a little cuz of Naruto's situation and his apprehension. I know I'm gonna
love this one. Can't wait for the next chapter.:D
love this one. Can't wait for the next chapter.:D