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Aw! >8^| but...but...that's just not fair!!!

Really well done steamy scene there. And fine as a oneshot. BUT...couldn't the end have said something along the lines of "until they met their soulmate again...soon?"

I'm so very amazed with your stories. I always find myself wanting more, God, it's so very beautiful and I love it so very much! Say, you wouldn't mind if I print them will you?

I want more of this!!! SNIFF PLEASE!!! It was very enjoyable to read!! :) Wicked Grin!!

Wow, Jelp! Despite that being a short one-shot, I actually liked it! Because moments like those are fleeting in night clubs and it’s ironic how the numbers received are ones that hold no important meaning while the ones lost or never given could have been that one and only true love. I enjoyed reading this and felt that it ended on a good note too where I can see that you don't need to put in another following chapter. I'm looking forward to Chapter 5 in ‘Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!’ You are so convincing of male pregnancy actually happening that it’s nearly scary (ah, but not really). You put such details in your stories and that's what I love most because you add such great character to everything.

~SasuNaru723~

It's sad, but very SasuNaru.

this was totally amazing. i love the end although it's sad. wow they didn't even get the others name, and that was totally risky business too lol.