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Wonderful chapter as always. It was a lovely surprise for me to come home from a week in the middle of nowhere and get five chapters to read of this wonderful story. Yes it still squicks me but the way that you write is wonderful and whilst I don't like Kakashi as a uke the way that you have characterised him is both clever and utterly believable. I'm gradually warming up to the relationship between Iruka and Genma; I love that Genma is so protective of his lover. I also feel very sorry for Ibiki and I hope that things work out for him and Kakashi. Looking forward to the next chapter and I agree with other reviewers - whilst some pairings in this squick me there is no denying that it is a five star story. Congratulations!!

I don't know what happened, but noticed a huge spike in the number of people who gave ratings for this story. Well I don't know who or how they did it - but two stars?! That's insane, I a, rating 5 stars every time I read it and hope to counteract whoever is skewing the number. This is a FIVE STAR story...and I hope everyone who is reading does their part and reviews it for 5 stars whenever a new chapter comes out!!!! Keep up the great work!

I think you should try and get in touch with the admins of this site - I just noticed, after checking your author page - that all of your stories have 2 star ratings. This is terrible as so many people (myself included) are faithfully reading and rating your story. Those rating numbers seem extremely high (1000+ ppl) for each story. My guess is that some vindictive girl/guy got a sick pleasure in hitting that rating button a ridiculous amount of time. This is unfair, cruel and simply outrageous. Perhaps the admins can look for the IP address of whoever did this and ban them from the site? At the very least they should somehow reset your ratings as some awful person has skewed your ratings to all of your wonderful pieces. Hope they can fix this!

lol kashi won't piss on jiji even if he was on fire lmao that was a good one.

I absolutlly LOVE your story!!!!!!! Its so romantic and still incrediblly sexy!!! By far one of the best I've ever read! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!! <33333333333333333333333333333333 =^-^=

does iruka get any work done with genma on the prowl? lol. yea itachi is the the kage ^_^

i wish i could see where this is going but i guess i have to go back a couple of chapter and read them through. it's so sad oro-sama died and jiji didn't make peace with him. hmm and ibiki is angry why? he needs to consider kashi's feelings. i think gai needs to pay him another visit lol

lmao. why is gai even allowed in the hospital? he is loud on so many different levels. hmm i thought there would be jiji/oro action lol. would there be any?

This is EPIC! I love this story, especially the Iruka/Genma and how they've been together forever...it's adorable. Hurrah for the threesome - Genma's that much closer to his long sought foursome! Loved Ibiki taking charge of those two, and then Iruka - I adore your Iruka!!

Love the twist with Asuma too - unexpected. Poor Iruka, good he's got his protective/playful guard dog/adoring puppy of a lover to see him through!

The way you write all of these characters is brilliant and I hope there are many, many, many more chapters to come!

Now this was an absolutely wonderful chapter. Every time I think that you can't possibly come up with another twist you come up with something like this. The concept of Iruka as Sandaime's son is one that has intrigued me before but I think yours is the first story where I've actually seen it. I loved the way you portrayed the relationship between Genma and Iruka and the inclusion of Asuma and Kurenai and subsequently their relationship. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Belle