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for Into the Fire

by sesshabattousai

schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg kashi/oro was amazing. i never would have thought oro to be that submissive, it was really different. it's nice that kashi showed him a good time, they can sort of heal each other i guess.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SHOCKING! BIZARRE! but oh so appropriate!


But master,” Kabuto began angrily, “you promised he’d be mine.”

“And he was . . .” Orochimaru hissed threateningly, “Was being the operative word. Now he’s mine.”

[lmao!]

kashi was thinking! a position of power... no matter how strange the situation, is a good thing. now kabuto can't touch him!

~the snake's a uke! [or was he just playing kashi?]~

ibiki won't be happy, but he'll understand!
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, this pairing still squicks me - even more so now that you've added in Orochimaru and Kabuto (plus I'm a Kakairu girl through and through) but I still maintain that this is a very well-written story and a highly unusual one at that. The relationship foundations you've given Ibiki and Kakashi are very strong and I'm interested to see where you take this. I loved the interaction between Ibiki and Tsunade - her assumptions that Jiraiya or Hiashi had been made Hokage as her replacement. Oooh, the two things that I definitely loved - Kakashi's still being manipulative and the fact that Iruka is Hokage, and a very kinky Hokage at that!!! Belle
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good night

I have been following this story for a while, it is great. It is well written slash, that actually has a plot and character development. in my humble opinion to many slash fanfic, focus on meaningless sex.

I must say that chapter 18 was a welcome surprise. It has always been my belief that the Third raped or did abused him some how for him to turn completely to the dark side. I mean being turned down for leader does not seem to me to be enough reason to try and wipe the villiage off the face of the earth.

My only hope is that the snake sanin is not playing Kakashi, he seem so real when he asked him not to hurt him or when he saw Kakashi cock and almost ran. I wonder if Tsuanade will be getting the welcoming that she is expecting. Who knows maybe she is the one that made the Third decide to use him for his sexual pleasure. But I am glad that Kakashi did not abuse the power of a seme and I am glad that My snake Sanin had a night of pleasure with no pain, maybe in time pain can be introduced.

While I hope that the Snake sanin does not go after Iruka, I do hope that Kakashi can have a slow but steady influence on him. No rapid changes, just maybe the path less cruel, and I hope Kakashi does not betray him, unless Oru plans on betraying him.

I think it might be a great threesome, after all Ibiki is tired of his current job. Maybe, him and Kakashi can become diplomats to sound.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol iruka has certainly been a closet perv lol.
i really like the paths you choose for your ibiki/kakashi fics. it makes the happy endings so well deserved ^_^
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that Kakashi gets to have revenge on that woman and also a great relationship with Ibiki. Thank you for another great chapter can't wait to read more.
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that couple...Kakashi and Ibiki. And you are making them so...well I really like the fact that two men so hurt and scared are getting a chance to be together. Thank you for another fine chapter and I can't wiat to read more.
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fascinating!

the relationship between kashi and ibiki is starting out on a solid foundation... as for the new hokage... mrrrrr...

i'm afraid that kashi may be spirited away before he and ibiki get together... woe to whoever grabs him...because ibiki just said he'd kill anyone who touches kashi...

wonder who he kills first?

love it! love it! love it! anxously awaiting the next installment..

~anz~
person polaris
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more,more,MORE!
person Googledi
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Kakashi is ust the most adorable little uke ever! But it hurts a kakashi-fangirl like me too see him hurt, but he is now with Ibiki and that is all that matters! I'm not too keen on the Iruka bits though, it would've been better if you left him out the story...but it's still a great fanfiction and your writing never ceases to amaze me!