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for Into the Fire

by sesshabattousai

schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg Kashi is amazing lol. to trick Gai like that, I wonder what Kurenai will say lol. But with Gai giving it his all the wedding will be perfect and 'youthful'^_^
With Gai manly tears of disappointment and manly tears of joy, honestly which is the lesser of two evils o.O
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahh when fuzzy things get in the way of something great i know that feeling well when the cat wants to sleep were my head gose lol i just cuddle her till she claws me and runs off
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pakkun is so sweet. i can see him fighting to death to protect kashi.
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cute sappy and very romantic thank you
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol he tattooed his name on his ass lmao. but i don't like the was kashi said yes it wasn't believable ^_^
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!WOOHOO, happy fyr. I was starting to want to bash him over the head, but then that lovely bit at the end. Oh and I am glad you can make me cry, means you;ve gotten to me, and that means alot to me to be drawn in like that. Can't wait to read more.
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well thats one way to get the point accross to a hard headed male lol
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
for some one that hurt it can be scary and hard to exept that someone can love them that much i for one know this feeling very well your doing very well with this fic and i feel the emotions as i read it your very good and i thank you again for being willing to share your talent with the rest of the world
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
New chapters! Wow...I can't believe any man would willingly take on labor pains - incredible. Even if he is the godfather, Kurenai sure better appreciate that. Nervous Asuma is adorable and a smart man to keep his distance.

Genma doesn't trust Kakashi - even after he saved him way back when?

Hmm...even if he is Hokage Iruka can't expect his lover to be a mind reader, especially since he was so concerned about his rep when he was at the academy.

A wedding! A wedding! Have to love weddings!
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg wedding bells ^_^