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for Into the Fire

by sesshabattousai

schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
again well done in part i hope the pain is done but at the same time i hope its not still your a good writier and i hope you keep finding the things that make you happy to write for those of us that are such demanding bookwyrms
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i can see this tale making about 125 chapters easy lol im so glad there is more to it and i can never thank you enough for sharing it with other bookworms like me
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*woot* kashi got an erection lmao. i like how you are bringing every little aspect into play in terms of kashi being as wholesome as possible in this relationship. he needs all the cuddling he can get ^_^
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow who would have thought that fighting we such a big turn on for someone lol
person Raholea
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*twitches in absolute glee*

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
TWINS!!!!
YAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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*coughs* sorry

annnywayyy....
btw, i can't recall if have actually reviewed for you, i know i haven't often, if i have before...
and for that i appologize since i have been dutifully reading every chapter as it comes out as soon as i can.

and being a mom, of 1 two y/o toddler, i feel extreme pity and yet pride for kakashi helping kurenai out with her contractions. too bad my hubby hadn't been able to do that for me.... 8twitches*
anyway, i love the way you've worked this story overall, the plot, the angst, the smut. i flow wiht the emotions as you have presented them, which is good, i like being able to sympathize with the characters. oh, and i'm grateful kakashi was able to get some help on the road to recovery so he can come back to being the kakashi we all know and love. as you've written him, of course. lol.

*sniffles and sighs* i can't wait to see what else you have in store, the twins are amazing i'm sure and i just hope Ibiki handles kakashi well, after his little "helping" session with kurenai. i can just hear him now... ranting gently about how kakashi didn't need to put himself through pain, again, when he didn't have to.... though i admire him for it.

Cookies and milk for a great story's author!!!! *cheers*
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think i want to stand by the door of Gai's class lol just for fun ^_^ I can just imagine him spouting stuff about manly love rofl. But Ebisu deserves it the most. I hope Genma doesn't make it into the class lol. rofl @ hiashi putting the moves on shibi, so funny, they're like kids all over again ^_^

I can't wait for the rest of this.
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg How did this happen O.O

You never cease to amaze me with all these plot twists ^_^
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i can see the happy ending on the horizon *does happy dance* thanks for so many updates in one day. you're eager to get this over with ^_^ gai sensei ftw!!!! i love his loudness it's so funny.
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED it (almost as much as Genma I think)! You managed to make it sexy and sweet all at once...perfection. Even though they're a 'side-couple' in this the relationship/history you created for them is awesome...Ebisu was a neat twist too. Speaking of side-couples, can't wait to see what happens with the father & mother-to-be. Mandatory classes? I HOPE not, at least not for the 'good guys' - a class with Gai on sensitive issues would just be too much. Now I have THREE (hooray!!!!) new chapters to read...huzzah for updates.
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you wanna know how much I love your story? I love it so much I read all 82 chapters in less than 24 hours...that's probably a slight bit unhealthy...anyway. I started to read this and became captivated, so I looked at your profile and realized that I had read your first two stories as well. Now I need to go read Matchmaker, so if you'll excuse me. *glues eyes to monitor*