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for Into the Fire

by sesshabattousai

schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol the task a woman has to endure. i love a bossy Kurenai ^_^. I hope she gets through to kashi :). I hope he gets all his manly attributes back.
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful delight ... I've finally been able to sit down and read the last ten chapters or so of this wonderful story. I have to admit you've converted me to the wonders of Kakashi/Ibiki. Admittedly, still not my OTP (Kakairu) wins that one I'm afraid but I love the way that you write the two of them. I also like the other pairings - Gaara/Raidou is another unusual choice but I do like it. Are Itachi and Kisame actually in a relationship? Regardless, I like the rapport between them. Kankuro is a complete and utter b****** and deserves everything that Ibiki can think up - I'm sure he can be more than a little creative *grins evilly*. I love the idea of Iruka as Hokage, absolutely love it and I really wish that there are more stories where that is the case. I'm going to shut up now and just say that I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that Kurenai will be able to talk some sense into Kakashi. For a supposed genius he's a bit dense when it comes to Ibiki but I guess that's only to be expected with his history. Can't wait for the next chapter .... one of several reasons that I'm taking my laptop on holiday tomorrow but *ssshhhh!* Belle
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me go "squee, lol, aww, wtf, grrr, and HOW IN THE WORLD CAN YOR JUST LEAVE HIM LIKE THAT?!?!" In that order. XD I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think i stopped breathing when gaara said "i'm sorry for your loss" lmao. thank god he's still alive.
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how happy I am to hear that. lol

I love the fact that you've added Raido into the mix now. He never gets any love. Also, I don't know how you do it, but you seem to have a magic ability to make odd pairings seem almost cannon.
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg O.O i think that's the wworst thing i have ever seen you do to kashi that was so painful. lmao i flinched and i don't even have a penis lmao.
i love how raidou stood up for gaara. i'm not sure if i want kankuro to die. is he in denial of what his father did or does he not know at all?
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i wanted to thank you for sharing this tale with all of us pervs on the web its very well done with few mistakes mostly spelling and grammar other wise very well done
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow raidou/gaara makes for some incredible smex ^_^kashi is a great matchmaker. i wonder how gaara will react in the morning? it's great that there are so many more chapters ^_^ i love this!!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
just pointing this out-
after the decision for raidou to go to suna, i think you mixed up the titles of the kages. gaara is the kazekage. i'm not sure if i read it wrong, but if i did ignore this ^_^ oh and that will be a real original pairing gaara/raidou
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Kankoru is going to get out of this with just a few broken bones. Because I don't think his brother is going to take this very well. As for somebody reading this, I am still here with you till the end.