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for Into the Fire

by sesshabattousai

schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story from the beginning, and I have loved every word of it. I'm kinda sad to see that it will be ending soon. That said, I actually can't wait so see how it ends. lol
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what to think of this development. By the tone of the convo with Gaara it's like there are gonna be bed partners. In my mind all i'm seeing is that he's cheating on Ibiki. But I look forward to seeing where this goes.
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens once again ^_^ wow to thick he is technically married. I hope he doesn't have to leave Konoha forever.
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They are having a wonderful start. lol at Kurenai, her ans Asuma's relationship is so typical lol. I love Asuma's reactions and retorts to her.
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow kashi took that badly, although i see where he is coming from. i wonder what the future holds for them. That Kurenai lol, i don't know what to say about her lol. Usually i can't think of Ibiki being scared but you write it so well lol.
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another couple of great chapters. I loved the way that both Kakashi and Ibiki were stressing about only having uniform to wear on their dates. I also loved Genma's single-mindedness at getting his foursome!! The conversation with Asuma and Kurenai was good and I love the other interactions between the characters. The entire chapter between Kakashi and Ibiki was great - giving a bit more insight into the men behind the shinobi. And Kakashi in a kimono .... just YUM!!! How could Ibiki not resist him?!
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the date was a success!! yay. lol the part about Gai being loud and green, that's really all you notice when he is around lol. i wonder how you'll work in the foursome, are you planning on even writting it? That's going to be amazing!!! Three sex gods and a closet ero-chuunin turn kage lol
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i really like how you portray ibiki. it's almost real. i would think his only clothes are his uniform as well lol. and genma really is silly, he is determined to get his foursome lol. i can't wait for the big date. i can just feel the tension from now ^_^
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this last chapter made me burst into a fit of giggles. With Genma pouting about wanting his foursome, ahaha. That's great. I hope their 'date' goes well, but with their luck, you know something will go awry, lol. The little gossip peice with Kakashi at Asuma's house was great too :D Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading. I've got this story and another one of yours book marked and checking for updates :D ~TiEnya
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As far as I'm concerned you are a five star author, ten if I could rate it that high. You and another author make coming to this site worth it. I love a uke Kakashi, and you do it so well. I was in tears last night, and I admire how you can get a chapter up almost every day while I struggle to get a paragraph some nights. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you.