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for Liberty Hall

by ahmenet

person Anon
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that your having to deal with stressful real life issues, I hope things get better for you soon. We all know how life can demand our attention away from our creative endevors so know we will all still be here waiting to read when you are ready to give us more. I love this fic and can't wait for more.
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping for an update. This story had me so hooked in the beginning I had to read again. Are you no longer willing to do the challenge?
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see an updaye for this! CHILDREN!!! And WORK!!! They always get in the way and make all the good authors takes "vacations" and shit when they should be writing... lol
I do hope to see more soon.
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter, especially the plight of Naruto, poor thing. It took him a while but he finally got what he wanted. Update soon please.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter and I really look forward to the next one.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this continuation. You used some really great imagery and some really good metaphors. The chapter was a little shorter than I expected, but maybe that's only because I'm excited at how it's shaping up. I really enjoy the flow here as well. It's as if I'm hearing the story told while sitting in a glade, watching the clouds. I do hope you can keep it going for quite a while and am very grateful that you are one of the two that took up this challenge. Please continue, even if the one warning about pegging leaves me a bit squeamish :(. But the writing style and the content are just too GOOD not to follow every word.
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! My challenge fic that you so graciously decided to try. I liked it, quite a bit. There's enough of an introduction to give me good insight into Sasuke. I like that he is so paranoid and anxious about everything. It makes good sense for Naruto trying to get under his skin or get to know him that he has an excuse to hide. I also liked the cliffhanger, despite the obvious misunderstanding with Sasuke. It makes me want to read more. Plus, Itachi is almost endearing in this chapter. A nice change from the usual asshole he is in many other stories. I'll be looking forward to more.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Nice start. You had me pulled in so much that I was so upset when the chapter ended. I've never seen a Naruto as a drug addict fic before. Its usually Sasuke. I cant wait to see more and the plot unfold.