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for A small crack in perfection

by eternalshiva

person Cydney
schedule July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to finish this? it is such a good story!
person Darklordlight NL
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. Whatcha been up to?
person Euri
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg this story is amazing. It just kept getting better and better with every chapter.

I wish there'd be more but seeing as how this fic hasn't been updated in two years, it doesn't seem like it will be.

I loved this story.
person Silversal
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, I just hope someday you will update soon. It is really a greatly written story and I'll love to see what happen next here.
person Silversal
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't lot but when I do it's for stories I just in love with. This sweet and funny, just start reading this story nonstop for two day straight and I should studying for an exam that coming soon so thank for the much needed mind break, it been a so long since I've read good fanfic that is written well and a nicely plan out plot. So for that I thank again and you have not forgotten about you're lovely story. Keep up the great work.
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Magnifique! Brava! Encore! Tickle our fancy more, you amazing writer, you. This chapter was wonderful! It sated my hunger and now I wish to return to the main road, with this as a frequented rest stop. Oh, the magic those hands of yours create. I simply cannot get enough. Thank you for being born, and growing up to weave such intricate webs of words.
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I only have two things to say after that long wait, "... THANK YOU!!!" I believe I speak for all of us here when I also say, "We missed you so much, you genius you."

P.S. I'm writing this before I read the chapter because I just had to say how happy I am to have you post again. If only I could say the same for "Feral Dreams" author. They've been gone forever.
person cynaga
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 14] Lovely~!
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure this is probably getting quite annoying but I'd really appreciate it if you would update this story. It has been almost two years after all...
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ChelseaPlume is right. It just isn't nice to just quit on all your fans like that. I've been checking in constantly on this story for, like, thee years now. At least give us a hint that you're even alive, even if it's just an update saying something like, "The two had sex. The hacker was caught. And Naruto and Hinata lived happily ever after, the end." I mean, it would be a really sucky way to end such a beautiful and touching story. But at least it would BE an end.

So... Please?