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for A small crack in perfection

by eternalshiva

person JamieGib
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad to see this beautifully written piece of work abandoned by its writer. This has got to be the best relationship story I've ever read between Naruto and Hinata. It's so well thought out and so carefully written that it practically writes its own love song. Plus, the secondary story involving the hacking is also damned interesting. I love seeing how you work all of the little references to the 'real' Naruto into the storyline, too. Please, please find it in your heart--and your word processor--to find you way back to finishing this lovely little gem. The sweet and wonderful story that is Naruto and Hinata deserve nothing less, and your faithful readers, new ones included, would love to see the conclusion to this very moving tale.
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please write more soon. I feel like a crack addict trying to quit cold turkey.
person Aleya
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahaha "You go bankrupt" Love it! Oh its been a while since I've seen this fic and I missed it so! Happy holiday hun!
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW NO! you're killin' me with this! so close and no next chapter?!
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT.
this story is so well written and sexy, and DAMNIT I WANTED THAT KISS TO HAPPEN! FUCK.
person nata
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wens the next update the next chappie is gonna b a fireworks of orgasms huh
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please write more... I'm stuck between this one and "Feral Dreams" and you're the only one who has updated recently.
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let me put it this way. Darklordlight COMMANDS YOU TO UPDATE...... please... (pouts) im so stinkin hooked on it. You're just too good of a writer for my own good.
person statnin
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
next chapter. Next Chapter. NEXT CHAPTER!!!
person Mal-com
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really amazing story! Good work!