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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Fantastic!! XD I don't usually read AU's, since I'm completely obsessed with the whole 'ninja' thing, but this fic's got me hooked! I'm a sucker for NaruHina, so that helps... but what helps even more, is the obvious writing talent you've got there. I love all the little puns (I only caught a few from chapter 4) that relate to the canon story. There's a lot of really awesome sense-activating going on, too. ;P Plus, the perfect balance of humor and angst, and realism. Just... seriously amazing. Keep it up!
*eagerly awaiting the next chapter*
*eagerly awaiting the next chapter*
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-rolls across floor- omg ogm mgo~! O_o I want moooooooooooooooooooooore~!
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wanted to mention that I'm very impressed with how you handled the grief and dealing with regret and guilt.
Keep it up!
- shadow
Keep it up!
- shadow
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your story. i really like how it's flowing. though i wouldn't worry about how ooc hinata is for your story's virson of her. after all coudring what she's dealing with if she wasn't a bit emoshional then it be unrealistic
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aha Luv it!
cant wait for the nxt one
cant wait for the nxt one
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to comment on the emotional stuff, which anyone would argue was well written.. however I will rejoice in the scene where Naruto steals Hinata's chair!!! Of all the things!! Absurdly funny and pure Naruto at its best!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha.. loved the chapter! Naruto and Hinata are always so cute together.
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such an interesting story... I can not wait for the next update... do update as soon as you can..
Ja.
Ja.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
People are idiots. Tomatoes are fruits. I'm American and I support this statement.
lol I love it when Naruto goes into Ramen shock. ^^ Too damn adorable.
Hinata and Naruto are always such an adorable couple. :D
lol I love it when Naruto goes into Ramen shock. ^^ Too damn adorable.
Hinata and Naruto are always such an adorable couple. :D
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June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it
Its addictive
update soon
Leaf
Its addictive
update soon
Leaf