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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be a second chapter...?
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I came buckets.
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That story was hot and pretty well written.
Do you have a fanfiction account too?
Hope to see more besides these three.
Do you have a fanfiction account too?
Hope to see more besides these three.
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that somehow all your paragraphs got eaten and now everything in your story is bunched together. Just thought you should know.
Also, I agree with the first reviewer; the way the story ends makes it feel as if it isn't over. I would LOVE a sequel. ^_^
Also, I agree with the first reviewer; the way the story ends makes it feel as if it isn't over. I would LOVE a sequel. ^_^
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...Wow.
I'm not going to lie; that was hot. While rape in itself is a terrible act, it's true that there are many women and men that have those little rape-but-not-really-rape-‘cuz-you-want-it fantasies. I loved and hated Tobi in this (in a good way) and I sort of chuckled at Deidara because he seemed surprisingly in-character for a smut fic. He seems like the type that would be an asshole during sex, even if it were entirely consensual. xD It's also really nice to see that you did research; it's rather uncommon so it's nice to stumble upon a story with an author who obviously knows what she's talking about.
I've always been a fan of the second person, reader-insert style of story and you did a great job pulling it off. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this from you in the future. Especially if you decided to write more Tobi. Sexually-dominant Tobi is surprisingly sexy. You know, people always seem to write Tobi off as being the good boy; they seem to forget that Tobi is a member of the Akatsuki, therefore he's a criminal and a competent one in order to have done so. It was kind of nice seeing someone portray his bad boy side. ;)
Well done. Honestly, I don't really know what else I can say other than I absolutely loved this story and I hope you write more in the near future.
I'm not going to lie; that was hot. While rape in itself is a terrible act, it's true that there are many women and men that have those little rape-but-not-really-rape-‘cuz-you-want-it fantasies. I loved and hated Tobi in this (in a good way) and I sort of chuckled at Deidara because he seemed surprisingly in-character for a smut fic. He seems like the type that would be an asshole during sex, even if it were entirely consensual. xD It's also really nice to see that you did research; it's rather uncommon so it's nice to stumble upon a story with an author who obviously knows what she's talking about.
I've always been a fan of the second person, reader-insert style of story and you did a great job pulling it off. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this from you in the future. Especially if you decided to write more Tobi. Sexually-dominant Tobi is surprisingly sexy. You know, people always seem to write Tobi off as being the good boy; they seem to forget that Tobi is a member of the Akatsuki, therefore he's a criminal and a competent one in order to have done so. It was kind of nice seeing someone portray his bad boy side. ;)
Well done. Honestly, I don't really know what else I can say other than I absolutely loved this story and I hope you write more in the near future.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read a sequel for this :D
One with penetration perhaps :)
Really well written and the whole "Tobi getting some snacks" really makes me think it's not over for "Me" yet :)
One with penetration perhaps :)
Really well written and the whole "Tobi getting some snacks" really makes me think it's not over for "Me" yet :)