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September 8, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Most excellent.
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August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! :)
I hope you make a NarutoxFemale Beast Kyuubi in the future! :)
I hope you make a NarutoxFemale Beast Kyuubi in the future! :)
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Moved pretty quickly right to the sex...maybe some foreplay before going right at it next time? Interested to see what you might write in the next chapter(s).
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, a little strange but not bad at all.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you made it go into sex way too fast, you should have at least let it build up for dramatic effect... and the story itself was mediocre