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for A Better Place

by mrsprophet

schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOU are AWESOME! :D. Both Iruka and Kakashi are fantastic, and Genma made me laugh XD. Shouldn't Kakashi be taking the drug all the time, so that he'll respect his injury more? I can't believe that Genma is THAT scared of Iruka now, wuss :p. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
person ranni
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic, can't wait to see more.
person Jennifer
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Please continue it when ever you get a chance. I love it and cannot wait to see where our greatness takes us. Eagerly waiting and drooling for the next chapter. (Yes I am shamelessly begging.)
person asialisek
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL~~!! this is a REALLY kute story! I love the dynamic you have between Kakashi and Iruka. Very genuine and not at all OC. i really hope you continue the story!!

and I'd love an email about Updates: hayai.kitsune @ gmail.com
the one thing that AFF really could use, and update notification system.

Please write more!!!!! :D


Joanna K.
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story, especially the wasabi scene. I was wondering about your LiveJournal to see anything else you've written.
person Alastriel
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
See how crzy you can get with the following items.

Iruka with:
A tube of toothpaste
Neon Pink Dye
A tube of gorilla glue
A box of toothpicks
and A Head Of Broccoli

Preferably all at the same time but individually is cool too. :D
person the-lady-smaell
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* much love hun! I'm really enjoying this story and am looking forward to an update. Keep up the good work MrsProphet
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seem to have missed yet another update. I really don't know how, I have a link to it on profile and check it everyday. I haven't read the latest chapter yet, I would like to read it all again first. In the meantime, please email me when you update. w.willow70@gmail.com
person F. Socks
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue with this story, as I have quite enjoyed reading it.
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love your story? Oh, and I miss it too.

Since your updates are not regular, have you given any thought to having an email update for readers? If you like the idea but haven't got the time then check out my profile, maybe I can help out one of my favorite authors.