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for A Better Place

by mrsprophet

schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You've written Kakashi brilliantly with his sort of emotional stuntedness and the bit with Iruka and the wasabi was pure genius.
person Ryn
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to let you know that i'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I love the randomly breaking in thing, it's freaking adorable. I hope your able to keep the nice light interactions going.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yummy :) lol. Well there are several typos and and conjunctive wording issues in each chapter. A beta may b needed. I know I needed 2 when I was writing lol. But the story line and plot laying is just stupendous :D I'm already dieing for the next chapter!!!!
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! After all may begging and constant checking, I actually missed an update. I am so ashamed.

Any way, on to the chapter review.

I liked the way the tables were turned on Iruka, now Kakashi has to watch him. It will certainly make things more interesting.

Thank you for updating.
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sweet! an update! this one of my favorite fics, good to see its still being written. ^_^
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. u have no idea how much. pleeease update again soon. i wanna see all the drama of having iruka stuck with kakashi for a whole sick day. lol. i can just imagine all the funny moments that i know are coming. because they are, arent they? *evil glare*

^_^

pleeease update soon.

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, if I beg and say pretty pretty please will continue. Your story was so intriguing, I am dying to know what happens.
person paradox13
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How great that you updated. I love the story so far and can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A quiet enjoyable read. I can't wait to see how things get duked out between Iruka and Genma!
person Teda
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! A mad Iruka is an hilarious Iruka. Another great chapter.