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for A Better Place

by mrsprophet

schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooo iruka is gonna kick some butt!!
this story is love!
please update soon. i wanna see iruka beat the living daylights out of genma, the smug bastard *evil smile*

*CHIBI sango offers cookies as bribe*
person Black Rose
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, It's so funny! And I really hope it will be a triangel-drama between Genma, Kakashi and Iruka. And I can't wait to see what Iruka will do to Genma.
I think you really have caught the characters personality.

Hope to see an update soon!
person Paradox13
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. Good job.
person Teda
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story :) And you actually have a well written plot to go with it, which is more than some other yaoi stories I have read! And Kakashi is as mysterious and confusing as in the anime/manga. Love that. I really adore this pairing, so I'm eager to read more.
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol kashi is really cute when he is all hospitalized. i hope iruka gets to be his nurse
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, continue. pretty please continue.
i love it already.

i'm looking forward for more

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*