rate_review Reviews

great story I'm looking forward to the ending, I also hope that you think about doing this type of stories in other works like Dragon Ball, for example, you have good writing and your stories are captivating, keep it up

Don't worry, a blockage happens to all of us from time to time, but even if you decide to finish the story here, let me tell you that it is an excellent story. It caught me in every chapter and I can only congratulate you for the work you have done. I wish you the best and thank you

I believe it is now the time to go out with a bang...multiple in fact.

At least one more chapter with this new mega swingers club they've joined would be nice before abandoning. Possibly some more focus on Hinata as the guys in the group gravitate to her as she's the 'new meat' while Naruto takes a back seat for the chapter.

The places where you have Hinata going at it are rather vague and glossed over, it'd be absolutely awesome if you did one more chapter just focusing on her in that way and in different 'situations'.

You've abandoned this a long time ago, if your note from ff.net is any indication though.